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Behold! I bring you the written word! ...That is all.

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Oh snap dis gon b gud.

…Anthro? That's new.
BUT NOT THE POINT!:pinkiehappy:
This story was…well, HOT! I have no other way to say it!
Have a like, my friend!

Note: A part of me feels guilty for favoring your "sexy" version of Fluttershy over the canon. The rest of me thinks "Who cares? KEEP READING!"

will read later, THIS I SWEAR!!!!!!!!!

will read later, THIS I SWEAR!!!!!!!!!

Perhaps some Cadence X Shining Armor for your next? We could use more of that

A NON-Sexty Minute Ponies story by Jujube?! :pinkiegasp: Can't remember the last time one of those came out! At least, since I started watching you; not counting those before did so, even if stumbled on them in cruising the site.

Well, for being a mostly clop story, it's written well, even if is anthro and maybe outside of your actual history for the couple (at least, I assume so, what with what you said on first story with this couple, about faithful relationships being the best, though I know they are still pretty loyal to each other). And has little explanation on what exactly their 'problems' were, but I suppose something that's been dealt with doesn't need to be rehashed. Best scenes to me include when Mac was double-sandwiched between Shy and Zecora's breasts and when Zecora was riding him while attending to Flutters. Not to say I didn't like the others, but I think those really seemed to appeal me to the most, even if that's cause of certain other reasons. :twilightblush: But the whole story seemed to flow well and was quite descriptive, painting quite a picture for us. Well done! :raritystarry: Thank you for bringing another piece of amazing fiction, even clopfiction, out especially after I wanted a new one after I finished those last couple a couple days ago! I say again, please don't stop writing anytime soon, you have a gift and must share it with us! :pinkiehappy:

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Well, there's quite a few Shining Armor/Princess Cadence fics on this site as-is, though maybe not nearly enough with um, dirty scenes, if that's what you mean. Though Jujube did already write one a while back, even though it did also focus on another couple as well, at parts of it.

1576577 If you haven't already read it, one of my better early works is The Second Time Around, a fic that focuses on two couples: Shining Armor/Princess Cadance and an older OC couple, both of whom are on their honeymoons. I thank you for reading this one as well.

1575473 I hope it lived up to your expectations.

1575481 I've been trying to write different styles lately, maybe expand my horizons a bit. Anthro is a little bit of a new challenge, so I thought I'd give it a go with this one (and also breasts...enough said). And there's absolutely nothing wrong with sexy Fluttershy. She learned to be more assertive, and I like to think that it applies to every area of her life.

1575489>>1576443 Please get back to me when you do! :pinkiehappy:

1577802 Honestly? This one was mostly just for sheer fun and a bit of shameless self-gratification. It might not fit exactly into the canon I've established thus far, but that wasn't my intention for this piece anyway. I just wanted these three to have some fun sexytimes (without things getting too dirty or weird).

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Indeed, some assertiveness certainly benefitted Fluttershy, but as we all learned in "Putting your hoof down", all things must come in moderation.

And yes…breasts are a very good reason...god, now I sound like a pervert...:twilightblush: Oh well, what can I say? I'm a guy who appreciates life's wonders.

1578049 I've read second time around I'd love to read more of those two from you

1578049
Lol, learn to take a compliment, dude. :derpytongue2: May be going overboard, but I always look forward to and enjoy your stories (maybe clop moreso than the regular, but still). I maybe knew it was intended to be something of your own idea that wasn't (I imagine) inspired by Sexty Minute Ponies prompt and something for sexyness that wasn't intended to be in your headcanon for their relationship (not just cause of them being anthro), but was still an amazing (and hot) piece of work. And you should continue to share stories within the brony community for as long as you are able and feel like it! :heart:

1578364 Oh, I greatly appreciated the compliment, as I have appreciated all of your positive feedback on my work. I sincerely thank you (and everyone else who's responded) for their encouragement and support. And don't worry; I don't plan to stop writing any time soon, especially if I continue to receive such wonderful comments from my readers.

*crowd cheers loudly. Suddenly they chant in unison*

WE WANT SEQUEL! *clap clap clapclapclap*
WE WANT SEQUEL! *clap clap clapclapclap*
WE WANT SEQUEL! *clap clap clapclapclap*

sweet jeebus...

1579237 Thanks!

1580502 Heh, that's unlikely to happen, but thank you very much!

1580806 Is that a good thing? :pinkiehappy:

Hmm. Will read and fav later... Up vote for now :rainbowkiss:

1583793 Heh, I hope the story lives up to the preemptive thumbs-up. Enjoy!

1578049

Simple reply my dear Jujube. It did in fact live up to my expectations, and higher!:twilightblush:

1584559 Glad to hear it. :pinkiehappy:

This was so cute. Not only was it hot, but there was a lot of love between Mac and Shy. I support FlutterMac! :D :yay::eeyup:

You have to write more anthro stories!!! The scene where Big Mac was playing with Shy's boobs? That was super, duper uber hot!

1594574 As do I. Thanks!

1595077 Heh, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Why? Because breasts. (I have no shame.)

I usually stay away from Anthro, but, this! This was amazing, you are a very skilled writer. :heart:

1597392 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

I normally don't like anthro, especially fluttershy, but this was really, really good...

hey, i read it was AWESOME! :pinkiecrazy:

1599372>>1600878 Thanks a lot!

And I see what most people mean, Ze'cora defiantly has more curveous features than the other ponies

1603493 She seems like she'd be very, very easy on the eyes in a human or anthro form.

i whole heartedly agree

1608683 Thanks! Glad you liked it.

very awesome and hot story. my only problem is with the character descriptions. what i mean is that you have some scenes that seem to indicate that they are humanized ponies with hands and feet, other scenes seem like they are still ponies.

1617347 Thanks for the read! As for your comment, the characters in this story are anthropomorphic ponies, kind of a human/pony hybrid. While their body types are similar to that of humans (i.e., they have hands and feet, they walk bipedally, etc.), they still retain many pony-like features such as their tails, wings, and elongated muzzles. Hopefully that addresses your concern.

I've never had sex before but now I want to f*ck something more than ever!!:pinkiecrazy:

I came. Everywhere.

10/10
Needs a sequel.... "Zecora needs another rutting:heart:":twilightblush:

1795321 Zecora just needs more clop in general. This one may eventually see a sequel, though I do not currently have one in the works. Anthro is a lot of fun to write, as are these characters. Thanks for the positive review, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Big Mac, Fluttershy, Zecora, anthro, well.

I will not eat u
Its good. Unusual, ya? Unusual

No words...










(gives like)

1919030 One word: Thanks!

Personally I try to 'shy' away from action of this nature involving two members of the same gender when able but I don't seem to mind it in this fic that much. How something is written does make a difference I have to admit. :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::yay::eeyup::derpytongue2:

2051666 Heh..."shy"...I see what you did there. :ajsmug:

Anyway, thanks for the read and comment (as well as all the recent faves...much appreciated). As you might be able to tell from my selection of stories, I too tend to avoid F/F or M/M action, but in this one, I felt that if it was Fluttershy's idea in the first place, she was going to make sure that Zecora was treated very, very well. This involved writing a brief sequence of F/F, a subject with which I'm not 100% comfortable, but based on the positive comments I've received from my readers about this story, I think I managed it fairly well. I sincerely doubt that an entire story of mine will ever consist solely of F/F (and I don't think I'll ever write M/M), but as I learned from this tale, I'm not incapable of composing an adequate F/F love scene.

But enough boring talk. All you need to take away from this is that I'm thankful for your readership.

2052109 Yeah I can understand it being her idea and everything else. And I welcome you for being thankful. :pinkiesmile::rainbowwild::raritywink::scootangel::twistnerd::moustache::eeyup:

He particularly enjoyed the night that he and his wife tried out the gel made from the sap of the Everfree's oldest trees. He starts to blush just thinking about that night of fun.

Anybody else have a morbid curiosity about what happened THERE?

2690688 Seems like your own morbid curiosity has yet to reach its conclusion, sir. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

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