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After the events of the Mmmystery on the Friendship Express, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash decide to find a gift to show Pinkie just how sorry they are. However, gift giving is harder than it looks, especially when three friends have to agree on what to get.

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Friendship Express allways caught me a bit on the wrong foot, neitherless this Story about the aftermath was very well done in terms of Characterisation and Plot from the intro over to the different kinds of shops to the sweet conclusion.
Now back to Don't Let the Sun Catch You Crying updating :twilightsheepish:

this was a nice read :pinkiehappy: good job :twilightsmile:

This sounds like something Hasbro would actually be tempted to do, create a little short story about some of the mane six going shopping for some important reason, it would break the sterotype that girls love to shop just because they can. :eeyup:

Loved it.

I'm sorry, but how the hell does this get featured and my story doesn't? Sometimes the mods amaze me on this site.:twilightangry2:

1574780 What do you mean 'get featured'? This story isn't featured.

1574992 It was for like half a minute, at least for me. Again, these mods confuse me.

1575052 Ah. Well, if it makes you feel any better, it isn't the mods who choose what's featured. It works on an algorithm of up-votes/faves/views. It is, however, known to stuff up every now and then.

1575082 Yeah, I guess I kinda knew that. But either way, I can either blame the mods or Dinkleberg, and that's almost been overdone

short, sweet, and so heartwarming. kudios to you bro, lovely little story

Excellently done.

Oh wow that was awesome!

Loved the overall friendship message this story carried all the way through, specially on behalf of Rarity during the kinda bizarre scene at the boutique, I also loved how each character had all the trails from their shows counter-parts, more so on Dash, whom did seemed to genuinely but was bogged down by her old selfishnes, and holly cow that ending, now THAT'S how the episode should have ended.

Oh yeah, all those innuendos were a blast, we need more like that in the next DLTSCYC!

Great work my friend, and thanks once again for this!

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Glad you liked it. Sorry it took so long to write.

To be honest, the scene with the twins was probably bizarre because I totally stole those characters from Rocko's Modern Life. As far as the innuendos and flirting, I actually wasn't sure if I'd gone overboard with that. I usually try to stay away from stuff like that because I can get a bit carried away at times and go to places I don't need to go. I indulged this time simply because I felt confident few people would read this story. But, I'll see if I can throw at least a little bit of that into my other works.

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Thanks, I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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I'm afraid that I'll have to disagree with you. It could have been done much better, and I feel it was a bit of rather weak writing. I attempted a slightly different writing style than my normal prose, but I'm afraid that I didn't change the style enough, so it fell flat.

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Thank you. I'm glad that despite it being a bit bland, it doesn't alienate everyone.

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Thanks

1574164

I'm sure they'll eventually get to this concept, and do it much better.

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Thank you for reading it.

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I'll get right back on writing that other story. Just as soon as I get back from SC12.

1590581 If Hasbro could make "Suited for Success" an episdoe dedicated to making dresses work for a mal audience than shopping shouldn't be a problem. :pinkiehappy:

This was quite a joy to read, even with a slow start. I liked how in the end, they found a great gift. :twilightsmile:

Dude, this was awesome. Why has it not had more views? More comments? I absolutely loved it! It could be an episode! And that necklace...was that Pinkie's grandmother who sold it?

But yeah...I loved it!

:yay: very touching, everyone seemed right in character, xD this could be episode

D'aww

nice story

Love the interaction with the shopkeepers, very amusing. Heartwarming ending.

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