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VanishingAct


Just another guy, wanting write stories.

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I, Maximillian Moorcroft, lead a good life. My every whim is catered for me by my gentleman's gentleman and best friend, Jiles, and I spend my days as I wish, which normally means a huge blowout party for most of London to come to once every two months. My family's affluence allows me priviledges that I wouldn't otherwise receive and I am happy. So when I wake to find myself not as my usual dashing self, but as a dashing pony, it bemuses me, of course. But I am resourceful, so it shouldn't be too hard to work this all out. Nothing will stand in my way.

My name is Richard Jiles, employee of Maximillian Moorcroft, a faithful servant. I do all of my duties with diligence and professionalism, and endeavour to help Master Maxie in whatever he does. He can be somewhat... arrogant, light-headed and ignorant of others in his ways, and I must say, that aggravates me, but what can I do? I am a professional. My job is to look after Maxie, make sure he doesn't do anything excessively stupid, reckless, or otherwise damaging. These turn of events for the both of us make me think that my job will become a lot harder... Can't stop now though.

Part of the PonyEarthverse

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

Rather good, for a first chapter. Just one question: Is this based off of reality? If not, could you make Jives like Willikins from Discworld? Here's a wiki page for him, by the way.

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Leave him alone! You and your Discworld...

This ought to be interesting.
It's not often that the rich class is painted in a positive light.

Not much of advice, but I freaked out with awesomeness seeing my favorite BACKGROUND background stallion. His name's Chocolate Sun, according to the List of Ponies on the MLP Wiki.

But I'll read it soon.

I'm offensive and I find this story British.

You get a fave and a thumbs up....I just realized the weirdness of a pony-themed website to have a thumbs-up button.

It's nice to see how someone in the higher classes would adjust to being a pony, by the way.

I, too, am a chocolate sun, but not in the way you think!

Alexandra...
helper and defender of mankind
Stipes...
spiritually intense and can sting or charm
I guess she takes after her father's side of the family (because she's acting more like the meaning of her surname as opposed to her given name.)

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