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A clopfic author.

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What?! A HiE fic with a female who isn't a lesbian?! Inconcevible!
Aww poor Mac, jeez comon you two theres plenty of things you can do to pleasure each other. :trollestia:

Hmm this is strange [stroking back cat] i must go see slenderman about this :unsuresweetie:

Time for the happy couple to get creative! Nice take on a scene we almost never get to see.

Also:

She could feel her tongue ravaging her nipples = should probably be his

This is a good story.

Have a like and a fave. :twilightsmile:

This odd thought just popped into my mind.

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Nevermind it's disturbing :applejackunsure:

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Seriously Verionica? I'm sure you could both put your tounge to good use.

Otherwise...fun story. Well written, original(to me at least) concept. Could stand to be explored more. Maybe have Ver start feeling guilty about it decide she should try something else.

An HiE fanfic with a straight female human???
YESSSS! :yay:
*reads it*
Well that was depressing :fluttercry:
and shouldn't Big Mac's package be much smaller considering his body size?
I know he's supposed to be well endowed, but this didn't seem physically possible or plausible

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Exactly. There's still other ways to have fun. :rainbowwild:
Too bad this is complete. I'd like to see what would happen next.

quite the twist compared to all the countless 'human boy is sent to equestria and one of the mane six fells for him' stories

TOO SHORT! GAH!
No really, it was a pretty good idea and all, but it's so short that it seems a bit rushed. :rainbowhuh:
You should've talked a bit more about how things started between them, or explained some other things.
It's a pretty good SHORT story, but I don't like short things. :pinkiecrazy:
Thumbs up coz of original idea and (I hope) goodwill.

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but I don't like short things

I'm sorry it's just . . . :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
And I don't like 'short things' either
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You're stalking me, right? :ajsmug:

And I don't know what is it that you don't like 'short'.
I was just talking about stuff like pizza's slices and all. :pinkiecrazy:

No, really, WHO likes short things?

Platonic no es bueno.:eeyup:

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Fixedddddd

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Her tongue can ravage all the nipples!

Also, it seems that you're one of the few writers that actually care about the quality of their work, so I'll help you out with some simple technical errors I noticed.

"His felt his throat was a bit too dry for his tastes."

"...drew him straight into his breasts." <--- That one's hilarious

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Aw man, I thought I caught all of them.

Anyways, fixed lol. That's what I get for writing this in the dead of night.

'Completed'

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?! :flutterrage:

so close big guy... sometimes too big is "oh fuck no!" for some people :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Oh gods that is hysterical! Poor mac though...

Well, this is definitely a thing.

Faved and upvoted.

Okay.. the sudden revelation took me by surprise. And the ending... Goddamn. :derpytongue2:

Hah! Interesting direction and not too shabby ending either. Overall a good read. :ajsmug:

:pinkiegasp: female human x male poni:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::rainbowderp::rainbowkiss:

nice:yay:

Hmm I may have to remedy this trend with Big Mac.

I'm not too proud of the places I visit in the web, but I've seen bigger thing fitting down there quite snuggly. So keep the hope up, Mac.

A human female X stallion where the female doesn't go "human males are way too small for me! Horse dick is the best!"? What sorcery is this?!
(Seriously, thank you!)

(Reads description)
(Reads chapter name)

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Well, at least they'll always have Friendship.
I hear it's magic, you know.

"You're too big to fit in any of my orifices, so instead of doing any of the hundred other things we could do to have fun (sexually), I'm instead going to just call it off."

What a fuck face.

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I agree with this with every cell in my body

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