Chapter 1: awakening
Spike was known around Ponyville as a "baby" dragon. He himself did not know why he wasn't growing-after all; he was only around 4 years younger than his adoptive older sister Twilight Sparkle. He had tried to find out who he was on a dragon migration, but only ended up getting a baby phoenix as a pet. It was only afterwards that Twilight did some research and found out that Spike was an Earth Dragon-who had a completely different migration schedule. Right now though, he wasn't bristling with energy anymore. His scales had dimmed and he had dark rings around his eyes from a lack of sleep caused by nightmares.
//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
As he was standing outside Carousel Boutique with Twilight-who was talking to Rarity, a flash of blue caught his eye. It was just the tail of another pony, but Spike's slitted pupils narrowed and he crouched down, growling out something that sounded like "Wort wort wort".
"Spike? Is something the matter?" Twilight answered.
"My….head….MAKE IT STOP!" Spike yelled out before he gave off an aggressive roar and dashed off into the Everfree forest, ignoring Twilight and Rarity's cries for him to stop. He was driven by instinct-ignoring everything around him as the shadows hid him from sight.
"What on earth is going on with little Spikey-Wikey?" Rarity asked.
"I'm not sure…maybe it's his time to migrate…" Twilight said, lowering her ears to her head, "I hope we see him again……"
//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Months passed by, and everyone was feeling the loss of the little dragon. But right now, everyone had a bigger problem to deal with. Chrysalis and her changelings had attacked during Shining Armor and Princess Cadance's wedding, having disguised herself as Cadance and weakened Shining Armor's barrier. Not only that, she used Shining Armor's love to strengthen her spell and defeat even Princess Celestia. Weakened, cornered, and without the Elements of Harmony, the "Mane 6" as well as the due-to-be-married couple felt helpless, until everyone's sharp hearing picked up a sound. A sound of something whistling through the air up the stairway and changelings falling to the floor with a heavy thud.
"Who DARES to interfere with MY Victory?" Chrysalis growled out, getting into an attack position. Right then, the doors flew open and a pile of changelings were thrown into the room where they landed unmoving. Some had sharp, needle-like, pink gem shards embedded in them, others had what looked like a something sharp had sliced into them and burned the wound shut at the same time. Others just had burn marks. That's when a figure approached the stairs.
//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
He stood on two legs, and was as tall as Shining Armor, including his horn. He wore silver-white armor with a chest piece that surrounded his torso and was bulkier at the back and shoulders. A black bodysuit was covering most of the body, while a purple dragon's tail that ended in a spade waved warningly behind him. There was white armor on his upper arms and lower arms, and upper legs and lower legs. The helmet jutted backwards like a shark's fin, only it had two similar "fins" either side of the top fin, while blue glass covered his eyes. His mouth remained visible, and a snout with two fangs jutted out that was purple with a light-green underside snarled at Chrysalis.
He had two things in his hand. In his left hand was a purple handle attached to a long object that had a triangular body and a long barrel at the end with pink needle-like gem shards sticking out of it. In his right hand was a one-handed, dual-bladed sword made up of green flames. Twilight was the first to snap out of her shock.
"S-Spike?" She asked, causing the figure's head to look towards them.
"Hey, you all miss me?" He asked, in a slightly deeper voice, "Migration was a pain, but I finally know about my species history…who I am…" He squeezed the handle of the sword and the flames went out. He breathed some more fire into it, and a little light came on. He stuck the handle on his right leg-where it attached itself almost magically and moved the handle of the other object into his right hand and supported it with his left.
"You will be nothing but history when I'm through with you!" With that, Chrysalis fired a magic blast at him, but no one was prepared for when green flames burst out from the back of the bulky shoulder armor and sent him into the air.
//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Spike flew using the green-flamed jet-pack dodging the blasts with practiced ease and fired a few of the pink shards from the object he held in his hands, and the shards flew in a fast, straight line and into Chrysalis's shoulder. When she turned to look at the objects that had struck her, Spike landed and quickly lit up the flame-sword, and cut through Chrysalis's twisted horn. He then grabbed her by the throat and slammed her back-first into the ground, holding the sword so that it was aimed just above her eyes as her spell holding Celestia vanished-with the focus point of the spell-her horn-no longer in use. Behind the glass, Spike's pupils narrowed.
"There is no honor in claiming victory through deceit." With that, he thrust the blades into Chrysalis's head and pulled them out quickly; shutting them off before letting out a roar similar to the one he gave before the migration. He turned back to his friends, to see awed stares and Shining Armor being fueled by Princess Cadance while he performed his barrier spell. Watching with a smirk as the other changelings were flung off into the distance, he gazed out over the forest.
"Spike?" A familiar voice that caused his heart to do flips called out to him as he pulled off his helmet, causing the green head spikes to pop back up and his slitted green eyes gazed out over the white unicorn mare-Rarity.
"This isn't a greed-growth, is it?" She asked.
"No. It was finally time for my body to age-and I needed to migrate to the place of my ancestors to do so. Not all Earth Dragons grow to monstrous sizes-only the ones that abandon our ancestor's path and follow the path of greed do so." With a smile, she leaned over and kissed his cheek, causing Spike's face to blush as he seemingly tripped over his own two feet with hearts in his eyes.
"You were my hero-again I might add." She said with a smile. His sister Twilight trotted up to him. "Spike. I heard you finally discovered who you were!" Spike nodded.
"Indeed. I am a descendant of the Sangheili-honorable warriors. I walk the harsh path of honor, but glory and honor guide our ascension!"
Stats
Page generated in 0.02 seconds
Total duration
672 users online
1,054,125 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
It's got potential the story's a little blocky and really rushed. Twilight was out of character she would have try and fallowed him that probably could have been elaborated on.
Ha!! Using a plasma sword to kill Chrysalis, awesome!!
Quite hard to read the last passage. Could do with being broken down into more
paragraphs, but still, it's a very unique story, so lets see where it goes!!
cortana "uhh we don't know where the arbiter is chief."
MC "fine, spike your the new rainbo- arbiter."
1582717
Thanks. This is my story here, so I'm still learning about the way stories look like after being posted. I will try to adjust it to make it easier to read.
1582095
There are some episodes to me where Twilight seems OOC-especially dragon quest.
My idea is that Twilight is more about helping her friends, and would be more worried about her friends being happy than doing everything she wants. Unfortunately, I had to cut my chapter shorter than planned because the time I had to write was suddenly cut off. I will try to make it smoother.
My storyline also seemed long to me, so I may have intimidated myself as well....after writing many long college papers...
You really need to learn how to paragraph and indent. Go read this.
This has potential, but you need to fine tune your writing, slow the pace down a little and make it less OOC
this story is good but you may need to fix up your writing a bit.but other than that it is very well done
He's has tall has Rarity?. Did you mean Celestia?
M-M-M-MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRR!!!!!!!
1585923
No. Rarity.
Spike will be Celestia's size, but only when he is fully grown.
He still has some aging to do yet.
1583505
Understood. Now that I have a little time, I've spaced it out better.
Thanks, that document was very helpful!
1584563
Path-of-cloud gave me a great deal of advice by sending a link to a document of writing tips, so he has my undying thanks.
What really got me was the format differences from the site I'm used to using.
I'm used to writing a document and uploading it, not having to copy and paste it. 
Needless to say, my writing has nothing to do but improve.
1586858
I'm glad someone else likes it.
I looked over my original plan for chapter 2 was looked over by myself and I literally had "Rarity moments" where I was picking the good stuff from the garbage when reading it, so it had to be re-worked. 
Expect it soon! 
Please keep reviewing when this updates, your comments keep me going-even through college finals
1584429
Spike seems a little OOC, but it will be explained during talks about his training when he had reached the "sacred home of the Earth Dragon's ancestors". Funny your ID is a SPARTAN though, Spike's ancestors are stranded Elites!
Well, Spike is a little OOC but I'm just gonna:
fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/292/a/3/keep_calm__read_by_laurenashy-d5ibuxh.jpg
Hmm...This story will please the Arbiter himself.
3.bp.blogspot.com/-Es5fdqszk78/Tx744PAawLI/AAAAAAAAB5o/XCwQn-PMM7Y/s1600/this%2BPleases%2BMe.jpg
>Ecocat<
"Indeed. I am a descendant of the Sangheili-honorable warriors. I walk the harsh path of honor, but glory and honor guide our ascension!"
Maybe cut back on word repetition. Cause that is a lot of honors in two sentences.