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While the Mane six are away with Princess Celestia on royal business Tyranno is hoping to spend a peaceful day alone. Unfortunately thats not going to happen when something big has appeared and has chosen Ponyville as its feeding ground and once more Tyranno must stop it along with the help of Lyra and Bon-Bon.
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I have a question is this a aliens vs predator crossover
1563227 no it has nothing to do with alien vs predator
Well, looks like I get to dive in first.
Who is Tyranno? What does he look like? What kinds of things does he do? Why do we care about him in the slightest? You need to give us more than a name if you expect us to like the characters.
I get the feeling your first language isn't English. If it isn't, go get yourself a proofreader; there's an entire group of them. Having one go over your story will improve your grammar a lot.
1563347 I need to point out that the reasonI haven't given much info about Tyranno is that I am keeping a sense of mystery about who he is ,where he comes from and any other questions that might arise about him, all of it will be revealed throughout the course of three stories that will reveal more about him and his life chapter by chapter in each story, I guess I didn't do this well so I will definitely go over it and improve on it. Also describing what he looks like just slipped past my mind when I was writing it. I forgot that this was a different storyline to one of my other fics so I didn't think of going over his overall appearance. Just so you know as well English is my first language and now that you pointed it out I guess I should improve my grammar. Thanks for your suggestion of getting a proof reader, I will definitely remember that next time and thank you for your feedback.
1563290 Damn oh well good luck wit the story