Reverse Clopper
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Question, is each chapter a sex scene?
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I'm not done writing it, but, as far as I know, yes.
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Okay, I'll check out then. I'm not a guy who can stand suspense, Sorry.
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Oh, alright. If you don't mind me asking, is that common among clopfic-readers? I usually write nothing but suspense, but I can see how that might be frustrating with this genre.
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Truth is IDK. I've always hated reading suspense but loved making others have it. I'm a guy who pisses you off when you piss me off basically.
Okay, you have my attention.
Go on,
one thing that's weird that I find here
again, this is a clopfic so it doesn't really matter
but
"You have to use smaller words, Twilight, humans aren't very smart."
...?
They don't really have science in the show, and certainly not advanced technology like we have
just bothered me for some reason, I had to say it.
Otherwise, though, it's very good so far, I think
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I like suspense so ling as its not drawn out too much.
I like it when there's a story but I except them in these kinds of stories
Amazing
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Pony arrogance. They assume they're the smartest around just because any human than comes through is always very confused after trans-dimensional jumping.
(Personally, I'm waiting for a fic that portrays the ponies as still being in the dark ages on anything that isn't magic, having no idea what germs are, and believe in spontaneous generation)
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Karna's pretty much got it. Plus, in the context of this story, she pretty much only encounters humans in the context of "frightened, naked, and horny."
Put us in any one of those states and we'll not be at our intellectual prime. All three? We're screwed.
me gusta...
yeah, that makes sense
>> Reverse Clopper
suspense is a doble edge sord and so is grammer
this fic is fine the way it is but i need to talk to you over pm im recruting good clop fic righters
good suspence is
the sent: lust of mares
the supsence is painfull
but worth it
on that topic i want to join a grupe with you and some other clop fic p.p
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I appreciate the offer, but I prefer not to work in groups, inspiration comes in fits and starts for me, so I have to work on my own schedule, and my progress is slow enough when I'm not working with other people.
As of two weeks ago, I never thought I'd write a clop-fic. Honestly, I'm not even much of a clopper, but I just got some random, inexplicable inspiration to write a few thousand words about having sex with ponies.
o.k.
THE SUSPENCE
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Give his dick a break..... but not his ass....
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Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
She gonna make you squeal like a pig, boy.
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Fluttershy would never do such things. She's just preparing her vuvuzela for a fifteen-minute long solo.
BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZT
ohhhhh you sly dog
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Riiiiiight, and I'm the King of Spain.
I am the king of my world. And I approve this story.
1561500 Um, have you met other humans? I hate to admit it but most of us are dumber than a bucket of shit.
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I'm glad to hear that my fic is getting so much support from royalty. It means a lot!
1570529
Well I'm the lord of time and I say this fic should have MOAR CHAPTERZ! :D
You seem to have found a way to take all the fun out of sex with the mane 6... which is an impressive feat. I don't really want to keep reading, but I'd be lying if I didn't say I was morbidly curious about how the rest are going to destroy the experience for the poor brony.
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Oh, excellent! If you wouldn't mind going into the future, downloading the finished story, and bringing the files back to me, it'd save me a bunch of time, and wouldn't be a reckless misuse of the TARDIS.
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Aww... I hope I'm not taking all the fun out of it. Then again, this scenario is set up to be fun for them, not for him; it's six girls trying to entertain themselves, rather than a brothel.
1570529 I try to think otherwise ;(
its called trying to have hope in humanity
its a very hard thing to do
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I cooouuuld, but where's the fun in that? ;)
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^this
I´m not sure what to think about your clopfic. Ok it is a Clopfic, so the Story should make no difference, but.... I don´t know...
- its almost rape
- "hahaha look at the stupid Human, he´s so weird and stupid and pathetically"
- she bit him? risk to ripped off his member? possibly ass rape in next cpt? now pain is permits?
don´t get me wrong! Your writing is good !
But why I feel bad when I read it ? And why can I not stop?
I hope he wokes up in the last cpt and everything was a dream.
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Perhaps not all the fun, but you're venturing into some pretty squicky territory. Rarity's chapter started making me feel pretty uneasy and if you're going into ass rape as it appears you might be....
I'm a firm believer in the idea of sex being enjoyable for all that are involved, and while the ponies at least seem to be enjoying it, your protagonist seems to be getting the shaft, currently metaphorically, and quite possibly literally in the future.
In the words of Princess Molestia:
Prepare your anus!
Well some one is getting raped up the ass ...
.. Poor brony doesnt know what hell he is in ...
At the end, have him make a monologue that he may have not made the best example for humans. Then, give a window of opportunity for a follow-up story. If you know what I mean.
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I suspect things might get a little better after Fluttershy. Just a little. And he's still yet to actually say 'no' to anything. Twi's an ethical pony, and I'm sure she'd let him quit and send him home if he asked.
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Oh, the story is always important. I don't know why I went in this direction, but it honestly seems more realistic than the usual 'human appears in Equestria, ponies aim to please him, human goes home.' Rarity is probably the only one bordering on the crazy/sadistic side.
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Relevant avatar as well. Good show.
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Fluttershy is incapable of rape. No may mean no, but you just try saying no to this face:
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An encore? I could try...
I'm going over the edge! I'm about to blow! I'm giving in to my desires! (All of the previous words were poor jokes. Forgive me please.) Eeyup, I'm reading an unfinished story. One of a few that made me.
That shit made me lol. I mean it. I'm sitting here and I read that and just laughed.
THIS. IS. SPARTA!
Happy now? Luna can be such a jerk sometimes...
Whoops, said something I shouldn't.
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Well, you still get to wait for Pinkie and Twilight. So you haven't missed out on all the suspense.
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NO! NOT THE STRAP-ON FLUTTERSHY! NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Lol, I have no suspense. I'm trying to decide if I should continue reading. I don't really want to hear about Pinkie Physics sex. She breaks all the damn laws so I'm kind of scared. And the thing with Fluttery? Semi-true. She has a strap-on but would never use it on a human. I actually saw her use it once...self-pleasure. She hasn't used it quite some time if you catch my drift. Uh-oh, she's here.
Well, I must say, you've put my fears to rest with these chapters, (thank you for not going Flutterbitch BTW), and I loved that little naive bit with Dash & Twilight, it was very well done and fit the characters nicely.
I can hardly wait for Twilight's turn now, but first it's time for Pinkie's meal
. Itadakimasu
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Glad to hear it!
That was a little expected but anyways I love the story IT'S AMAZING
Okay, haven't read it yet (just starting) but I must know, was my old comment the impetus for the chapter title?
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Dear sweet Luna, what has he gotten himself into now? At least he got to rest his aching nuts... man that part gave me some sympathy pains.
Looking forward to Twilight, hopefully she'll be nice to him