There's no other pony Rarity loves as much as Rainbow Dash, and nothing makes her sader than hearing that her beloved friend is dieing of pony cancer. But unbeknown to Rarity, Rainbow Dash has one final wish before she dies.
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That pic SO doesn't go with that title.
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I think it's accurate.
This is cool! Please continue!
This story is SO awesome! 5/5 Big Mac's until now!
I'm looking forward to a new chapter, I hope it won't take too long ;)
I'm sure that things will fall into place later on, but right now I can't understand why Rarity is such an unjustifiable bitch towards Rainbow.
oh my god...rarity is a bitch.can't wait untill next chap.
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Thanks.
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It's hinted in the end of this chapter.
2565480 i hope rarity changes how she feels tord rainbow changes soon
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Well, even though I knew this is a RariDash fic, the end of the chapter completely took me by surprise.
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Intuitive.
Rarity is such a bitch! Love it!
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2566225 thanks i try.now update!please
It's Twenty percent cooler!
"There's no other pony Rarity hates as much as Rainbow Dash, and nothing makes her happier then hearing that her not-so-beloved friend is dieing of pony cancer." ...is this seriously how raridash haters see their relationship? The don't have the most on screen interaction but it's clear given how much they've gone out of their way for one another that they are friends. This is absolutely dispicable and how it got into the raeidash group is beyond me.
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Alright.
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The moment I read the description I had a feeling this was going to be awesome, glad to know I was right
! Carry on you magnificent bastard you 
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Yeah I read it. It's even worse than the description implies. How the hell is any fan of raridash supposed to like this at all? What humor is there in this?
This isn't "slightly altered"...this is ridiculously out of character for Rarity, just for the sake of being hateful and mean spirited. Really comes to show just how miserable the anti Raridash crowd can get, and I can really only assume you put this in the raridash group just to spite fans of the ship.
I haven't Been much a fan of raridash... but you magnificent bastard have made me want more! Please don't wait for 100 upvotes
I love this story allready.
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Great taste.
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Gotcha'
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So you don't deny this is just a blatant middle finger toward raridash fans? Cool.
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Yeah do you think you can stop being a miserable jerk and actually address anything I said there, or are should I just take you're assholish responses as confirmation of everything I said.
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Do whatever you want.
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...whatever, man. Fuck you.
i may have read this if it weren't for the fact that someone in my family had breast cancer
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Sorry, I guess.
2577238 thanks but my moms fine now
... You're holding this off until you get a set amount of upvotes? Seriously?
Don't get me wrong, I love this story and would love to see where it goes. But holding a chapter hostage until you hit a set moment that may not come is ridiculous.
Just post them as they come, and the fans will soon follow.
And because I just noticed it in the emotion thingy:
what the hell did i just read.......0.o
...You really are gonna wait till you get 100 upvotes aren't you
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I'm pretty busy with other stuff as of late, so I can't focus on writing atm, but I'll get around to it whenever a slot opens up.
2824326 Ah, okay. Yeah, I know how that is. Work, family, bunch of other stuff can eat up your free time.
I don't hate any shippings, however I do hate when people post something purely to troll.
I never thought I would post a comment with a 0/5 pinkie smiles but congratulations you managed it.
Hello Rarity = Element of Generosity.
For that to work she NEEDS to care about her friends, as proven with the discord episode when he turned them against each other.
Thank you for an UN-pleasant read.
Oh and downvoted
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GIVE ME MOAR
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Homophobia??
I mean, Rarity seems to use a tone of spite when describing Rainbow Dash's "indecisive chromosome". Maybe, Biphobia? Is that a thing?
Yeah, I gotta agree. Rarity wouldn't act like this. This fic doesn't make any sense ;/
Downvoted.
I'm still surprised ppl can't take a joke
when will new chapter come out?
If Rainbow lives I'll be quite unhappy. Rarity best get some poison just in case.
Now we have Rarity's motive for her distaste of Rainbow Dash. Can Dashie earn Rarity's love? Our journey will continue whenever the good Doctor has time to write.
...ten bucks next updates in November.
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Don't hold your breath. Haven't had time to write this for the duration of a year and I still don't have time to write it, so I'm canceling this. I only wrote Chp 2 cause I'd already begun writing it waaay back, and thought I finish it so I can scratch it off my bucket list.
I've been thinking about commissioning a writer to finish it, but I don't know... writers always seem so unreliable to commission. They all work at their own pace and are all prone to depression and writer's block whenever they get a great idea to work with.
4777568 Awwww. Oh well, at least we have closure.
You are a horrible person for making a beloved children's character a death obsessed freak who loves when their friends are dyin of something as horrible as cancer. Three of my grandparents and my best friend have died of cancer. He died when he was 9. Fuck you
I not going to sit here and say fuck you man, this is a shit fic go kill your self. That would be in bad taste you should put a disclaimer saying this fic may trigger Rarity and Rainbow Dash fans. but all around I don't like the fic, but I do like your writing style and find there's little grammatical errors and spelling was on point as well. so yeah anyone read this comment look at how to improve his writing, not what the fic is about he made the damn thing.