As I stroke each letter key The only thing that concerns me Is that my fingers dance so well To create a perfect story to tell
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I lolled
LOL'ed pretty hard. Good job sir.
P.S. Listening to Lux Aeterna while reading this...I can't even explain how amazing it was.
Um.... Not rated Mature?
Should be rated at least Teen.
Short, sweet, and hilarious. But I think this miiiight need a Teen rating for the sexual references.
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It's not clop. Twilight was awake and messing with them the whole time.
I lol'd pretty friggin hard, though. Good work.
HAHA,
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Like the name... Yours, Vash was awesome.
1188 words of pure freakin' funny awesomeness
Should be teen.
This feels mildly familiar, somehow~
You should really bump this up to Teen just to be safe.
It killed me
I wanna see a fiction about what happened the next day
I always seem to see these things coming. It was better written and more interesting than these feature shorts usually are
Heh. Nice. Needs Teen. Done.
1546133 Are you sure she was awake? I don't think she'd..."eject" magic willingly.
1546116
..... That's just eerie, as soon as I read your comment Lux came on over my playlist.
-Sturrn
looks like someone has been taking lessons from Princess Trollestia
Twilight, you troll.
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I believe the description would be better as "whether it's muscle or bone" rather than "whether or not it's muscle or bone".
Teen or Mature, not Everyone...
You probably ruined somepony's day.
Very fun story, I'd love to see their explanation too!
But this does in fact need a different rating, reference this news post
Adult humour should be rated Mature.
This better hit the feature box
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She learned from the best.
mildly disturbing and very humorous.
Loved it
Ha, that'll learn um
I can't help but love Troll Twilight (Trollight? ) stories.
And thus does the student become the master.
Yeah, this is teen, unless if the rating is to mislead. Very funny though.
lol trolllight sparkle
EXCELLENT punchline!
Ju-just...hahaha....i cant sto- a-air i nee-i - i nee- *fall off bed and twichs on the floor*
May a gentle breeze comfort and calm you in the hardest places (no pun intedned) and a warm smile keep you safe from the darkest sorrows. *falls back ont othe floor*
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Just cause you mentioned it, I had to play that song while reading.
And yes. It was awesome. And surprisingly fitting.
I want to see what happens next!
Beautiful
LOL!!!
That was hilarious, and wonderfully dirty.
Good job!
1547212 Look at that, I've started a trend!
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And that's how whenever someone hears that song their first thought is,
"Where do I know that song from?........ OH YEAH! It's the theme for Maresturbation!"
what do you expect from the student of trollestia
Lawls! Just lawls!
1546116 So glad you liked it, I kind of want some one to turn this fic into a flash animation with that song in the background so I could see how that works.
1546130 Thank you so much! That issue has been fixed!
1546133 Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
1546147 Thank you so much! I'm a little shocked it's gotten so much praise
1546182 Taken care of before I even signed back on! Great Moderators. I'm glad you liked it.
1546195 Well, thank you! I appreciate the compliment
1546319 Fixed. Thank you for that correction.
1546378 Oh I'd love that! Then maybe FimFic would give my other stories a chance to touch their hearts as well as make the giggles.
1547164 I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
1547239 Thank you!
1547350 Thank you so very much!
lol
I knew Twilight was awake the whole time
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Well that was... different. I laughed, not at the punchline, but at that weird set up.
>>Queen of the Spectra
Unfitting music is unfitting. I had to try it out. Never laughed so hard in my life.
haha that was pretty good not gonna lie
The apprentice has learned well. Heh, hilarious little pic.
You are just mean Twilight, just mean. But I've done worse.