A look into the past as Fluttershy graduates, moves to Ponyville, buys a cottage, and makes some new friends. But only Fluttershy could purchase a haunted house.
If you're looking for a cute Nightmare Night tale suitable for all ages, this is it. If you want horror... this is most definitely not it.
Very nice I approve!
I'm surprised at how little traffic this fic has...
Then again releasing it at nighttime and amidst a flood of Halloween fics might have had something to do with it.
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Thank you!
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Thank you! I uploaded it at 6:00AM EST on the 31st, but the approval queue took longer than I expected (I'm not sure if that was due to higher than normal volume because of the holiday or outages related to the storm). I would have uploaded it sooner had I realized that it wouldn't be approved until the 1st. But now I know for next time.
I really enjoyed reading that. Thak you for giving me that wonderful story to read! I shall be ever indebted to you.
Sudofox
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You're welcome, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This was a pretty interesting fic. Did it have anything to do with previous mlp series? Either way can't wait to read any other fics you come out with.
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have a few others in progress (most of which will fit into the continuity of this particular story, but the one closest to completion is a movie parody that's completely outside this series) and hopefully I'll have the next one done before long. Next in this series is a Christmas/Hearth's Warming Eve story that I'm really hoping to have done before December 25th.
Minty is a G3 pony (and G1 for that matter, but this one is definitely intended to be the G3), and she references G3 Rainbow Dash as well. I try to avoid OCs if I can help it, and thankfully MLP has a long history so if I need characters other than the current cast it's not hard to find a suitable G1 or G3 (and/or G4 toyline) character to match what I need. But all of the situations are specific to G4 so there's no required viewing of previous generations to know what's going on.
Hey This is Grumpy Bear from Swiftheart's Rabbithole! You did great! Nice product placement with the Care Bears and Cae Bear Cousins! LOL A little constructive creatism. It would benefit everyone greatly if you can insert time lapsing sentences and put more descriptive detail when someone is talking and descriptive detail in general. (For example, I want to know what Fluttershy's property looked like.) Overall, it was great and I loved it!
Awwww! That was sweet and adorable. I loved Fluttershy's "wagon theft" stunt.
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Thank you!
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It didn't hurt that the story can't be voted on.
No votes, no way for it ever to hit the Popular bar and have lots of people notice.
Which makes it a somewhat hidden treasure.
That was a good story.
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Thank you!