Twilight Sparkle has always been Princess Celestia's perfect student. A model of good behavior, of friendship, and most importantly, raw magical skill.
But what if that magical skill wasn't accidental?
What if Twilight was just a weapon?
And what happens if she finds out?
A very, very special thanks to Ralastas (http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ralastas) for assisting me in this and writing Twilight's final letter.
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"Twilight’s eyes had lost all semblance of humanity"
DERP!
I think you meant 'instrumental' not 'detrimental'
instrumental (adjective) - serving or acting as a means or aid; "instrumental in solving the crime"
detrimental (adjective) - causing harm or injury; "damaging to career and reputation"
Just thought you might want to fix that.
Other than that, looks interesting so far.
1542671
But "ponyanity" is a horrifying and despicable word! What would you have me use?
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Good point. I'll fix that right away. Thanks for pointing that out!
Wow, that got me hooked. Can't wait to keep reading this.
that was ....interesting
sad
a little creepy
Random as the buscus....
But Interseting...
It was still g a good fic
Short, dark, and well-written. While the ending seemed a tad bit rushed, I still love it. Take a fav, like, and watch.
Oh, fuck. Shit just got real.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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I've already sung my praises, but ill do it again.
This story was excellent, it caused me emotions I don't normally feel.
Yet, like a stray dog you gave food to, I keep coming back.
It's just so... perfect.
oh my....there's going to be lots of
isn't there
and we are way past the deep end......
People, you should listen to the full theme song after you read this. Somehow, it's extremely fitting and appropriate for the "end of a journey" sort of scenario.
fucking... EPIC AS ALL HOLY HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it... was... AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My feelings.
1542683
I think people use equinity these days.
1542758 AGREED.
What in the heck
Are
You
Pulling on me?
Are you mad?
Seriously,
This fic needs to pull back a step and refocus itself.
Okay, Still W.A.Y. P.A.S.T.
But, I think I can handle it a bit better now.
Although, I think the reason this fic doesn't have many likes is because of the previous chapter.
This makes me sad.
But still better.
I'm sorry I'm not the best commenter.
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I'm a tad confused, overall. What was it I did that made me seem mad (I can only assume you mean "mad" as in insane, not "mad" as in upset xD) And what do you mean by "Way past", if I may ask, along with what your issues were with that particular chapter?
Either way, thanks for your comments and your favorite
Amazing story...In fact, its one of the only 2 that have ever made me cry. I hope you make more of them in the future.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it
(By the way, I like that name~
1570345 well twilight is moderately insane to begin with so this just pushed her over the edge and of course. ThatHandsomeDevil would go way past to announce that
1570646
The first letter of every line spells W.A.Y. P.A.S.T.
It was half joke, half my honest feelings. I'm sorry I'm gonna have to go re-read this in order to understand what I was talking about.
EDIT: nevermind, I remembered just by looking at the summary. It just seemed like it EXPLODED far too quickly, I mean, I know it was a word trigger- but seriously too fast too insane.
However, your story was still good enough that I can safely say that regardless of the fact that I almost stopped reading because of said fast advancement, this story is still marked among my favorites.
1666817 Yeah, I was basically saying he went way past the boundaries of WHOA!? there.
1668502
Holy Celestia, that's clever. I didn't notice that at all.
And yeah, I totally get what you mean. It does kind of suddenly blow up, but I wanted Twilight to be so far gone that the slightest provocation would make her tip over the edge. Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed it
Using this one fanfiction I have turned at least 6 of my friends into bronys
Good Job at that!!
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Ahah, really? That's unbelievable! Well, from me to them, welcome to the herd (\
While I still maintain my record of not crying during a fanfic (I even passed the My Little Dashy test) This was a beutiful story and kept me enthralled the entire time.
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Probably best if used sanity instead?
the plot has a lot of promise.... but you didn't work it out very well. sadly. oh well. nice try.
Well it didn't go in the direction it should've so for me it sucks.
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raritydespair:The Horror The Horror!
Yes there is mwaahahhahahahahahahahahahaha
godLUNA she hit a princess!8394248
lol
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run
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dam it ... now ya done it ... ya just had to make me cry ... didn't you