Flight through an underground mine and beyond, at the fastest possible speed, naturally.
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The Grey Pegasus
Pony stuff author since 2012. Writes supposedly good stuff. Still haven't made a break. Still persistent. Probably highly unlucky. Or hated by the universe. Either determined or insane. Or both.
The Grey Pegasus
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This story is what happens when I do a crossover with Minecraft, without actually doing a crossover/ Because I have to admit, the atmosphere and imagery of that game can get to pretty impressive levels sometimes. So this just carries over some of the atmospheric elements.
I think this story came out alright, but for some reason, it doesn't feel as good as my completely spur-of-the-moment 30,000 Feet. Actually, no, this was kind of spontaneous. At least, the second half of it was. Wrote that in one night. Still. Feels a little rushed, but after trying to write this thing for a month, I really just can't care much anymore.
I'm actually considering making a series of these type of stories called "Rainbow Dash Flies", with the first story being 30,000 Feet. Just random stories about Rainbow flying. Granted, my descriptions won't be as vivid as some other stories out there, but the point is to just write a captivating flying story.
Also, this came out kinda long. But it's not as simple as just falling in the sky. So it came out longer than I originally expected.
As for that joke (you know which one), I couldn't pass it up after I thought about it. Deal with it.
Cover image was found on Google Images, then added on with stuff.
Because I wrote this before the site update, I decided for an author's comment instead of that nifty A/N box, which I'll use in the future. Maybe.
K
Here before Nunchucks and Regidar
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Holy shit. Since when did you have the #1 spot? I never noticed.
1800063 Check it.
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I looked. Since when?
Congrats on that btw.
1800070 For a while. I've got a 1500 lead on everyone else.
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With comments per day at 22 compared to 11... yeah, I can see why.
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Bravo sir. Bravo. Faved.
If you would write an adventure story with 50.000+ words, I would be so happy.
Nicely done! I really liked the inclusion of sound and pressure at the beginning- it's an element of the environment that seldom stands out enough to get used, but here it was very useful for conveying speed and atmosphere. A good read!