i've been bewitched with the charm of the fanbase, so it's a delightful pleasure to read fantastic pony tales
Trixie seeks to overcome the magical dexterity of Twilight Sparkle and so, it begins a journey in seek of knowledge and revenge.
Could it be possible for a magically incompetent pony to beat a prodigy being tutored by a goddess?...Odds aren't on our heroin's side, but destiny is a playful force and can change it's flow from time to time.
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so i hope you enjoy reading the story, as much as i enjoyed writing it.
English isn't my natural language, so maybe you'll find some mistakes
or awkwardly written parts. Please, don't be too harsh while pointing those
Trixie that actually plans her revenge, acknowledges power gap between her and Twilight and acts confident, strong and smart? Definitely tracking...
Wait revenge...plot....smart Trixie......Twilight not total nerd? I like this already
It's all good, except I cannot see the rhyme in what Zecora says
Not too bad.
please forgive me if my writting skills don't fulfil the standards, the truth is that i'd never wrote something in my life, i bet i'll get better over time, meanwhile, this is what i have
This looks like an interesting take on Trixie plotting revenge. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Hmmmm, this could be good, tracking now
Wow! a trixie revenge that isn't a clopfic.. and no romance.... this im so gunna read you have my attention..
What do you think?
Um..Just asking... but, can you made the chapter a bit longer?
i find it perfectly long in my opinion but hay thats just my opinion
121238 Of course, feel free to post a comment or PM me, anything that could improve my skills will be taken gratefully
121133 i'll try to, but, do you mean chapter 4? or the upcoming chapters?
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the upcoming chapters.
123598 ok, ok
Good explanation of smoke-breathing dragon!
I am Interested.
One or two grammar mistakes here and there, but I'm still enjoying this story so far.
Keep up the good work and when you proof read, read slowly and out loud to yourself. There were few grammar errors that I could spot.
Interesting. You had "wile" where you should have "while". Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
I just read all the chapters of your story today. Chapter six is my favorite one so far because of the improved formatting as well as the story getting more interesting.
214238 Thanks Whistler, I'm trying to do my best in this, but since school has started, it's going to be a pretty rough time for this project
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Also, I've been showing my "Friendship" composing some music; not too shabby, but as a beginner whitout acces to good music production sofwares, it's quite "meh"
Trixie in Trouble.
Joke Battle.
Magician Challenge.
Swarm.
Making Brew.
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Feel free to take your time. I know that I feel rushed when I try to get a chapter done with a self-imposed deadline.
Swarm is a bit catchy. What is it an arrangement of?
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Parasprite Polka.
do you mean heroine? because it would be funny to see heroin do anything :P