Being a nice guy gets you no where, especially with a drunk ass goddess. If you ever run into a drunk lady talking about a 'game' then run away and lock your damn doors, don't know how much that would help though.
A story written in the world of Blackwing and Rust, read their stories, they deserve it.
Co-authors: EverlastingNightmare, JarOfHearts
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Looking back at my writing its HORRIBLE! But I suppose its that way with all writers.
How very interesting
Aww snap battle with a giant shark!
These guards could get quite shell shocked.
My thoughts on this story.
Initial thought: A NEW CHALLENGER HAS ARRIVED
During reading thought: Lolwut vomit?
After thought: A giant stone monolithic colossus is your piece? Really?
Reason: Look, I'm not all that impressed with this. It's Chessverse, but it only loosely follows my self proclaimed rules of said verse.
One: The player. Who is she? The one who sent him here of course. Echo had Discord, Griffin has the Ominous being, MangoJack (
) had (I think) a villian from G1 ponies, Ace has Lady Luck (Aka... Miss Fortune 
),Knightmare has Celestia and (Insert name of Singing sea serpent here) had Luna.So who is this almighty entity?
Two: The piece. Just an annoyance. All the pieces are Pawns in their own right. They are small characters that end up doing impossibly great things, AKA,
Echo - Being but a diamond dog with flaming claws, he slayed a herd of Tatarus cursed Hydras and facing an evil spirit and destroying it completely.
Griffin - Being nothing but a normal Griffin he killed a massive black dragon using nothing but wit with a side of crazy.
Ace - Being but a satyr, he destroyed a paranoid steroid crazed diamond dog.
MangoJack - I think it had something to do with either rat people, or a tribe of cannibal cats.
Three: First contact. Sea-ponies? Really? *Sigh
Notice that in all the stories the first contact had something to do with either a well known character, or one that could be familiar.
Griffin - Awoke as a griffin, the first he met was a concerned griffin named Gilda
Ace - Met Iron Will and Summer (Granted she is a pony, but Iron was first) first
Mango - Met a Bast first. (Bast - Cat people)
Echo - Met Daring Do (And 'Ah-we-zo-tol' but you know)
This could be okay, I might follow this but nothing is certain.
1537273 (EverlatingNightmare) I honestly dont see a problem with being different in this world, dont want all the stories to be the same, do you?
1539930 I know, but what would you rather, a small person doing something huge? Or a Huge person doing something average.
Why not the character become some sort of sprite that possesses a rampaging Malus. That'd be cool.
1540057 (EverlatingNightmare) Maybe, we'll see what happens.
1540866 Wait wait wait. What about he loses his hold on Malus and becomes detached from him, meanwhile he has to fight to regain control somehow and if he doesn't do it soon then Malus' boot will be in place of Ponyville!
1541533 (EverlatingNightmare) Like I said, maybe,
when will you write moar i need MOAR
i mean if you dont mind
I have waited for three damm years now cmon already!!
this story is ded
I DESIRE MORE
This is canceled, the writer has not been on this site for around 8 years.