• Member Since 6th Jul, 2012
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An A10 Warthog

I write fanfiction. About ponies. And relevant topics. I hate these things so much, as I have a lot to say and no where near enough room to say it.


This was unexpected. I woke up on a normal day. A boring normal day.

Well, I guess I can't say boring anymore...

This is part of the Pony Earth Verse

Chapters (8)
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I made this up as I went along. Hopefully it will make sense.

Actually, not bad. Some grammar errors here and there (space after the end of a sentence missing a few times). Still decent. Tracking...


Oh, so YOU were the one who stole Spitfire from me. Lol, jk. I don't mind. :rainbowwild:

oh... i thout she was in equestria... try explaining that your in spitfire to soren right before a performance :rainbowlaugh:

Huh, I was always under the impression that the Spitfire Sexypose was a fan thing. You know, basically fanart for the wonderbolts. And that Spitefire herself was more level when it came to bedroom antics.

I never did anything sexual. I just stated that the fannon made it awkward.

ok finished reading,I guess you could meet up with surprise in salt lake or chicago

Doesn't there need to be a way that Surprise finds out about the other Wonderbolts?

1593054 idk I need to figure something out

Wow, some of these humans sure are racist. :twilightoops:

He lives in Colorado, probably just high.

If he was High why was he tripping out and shooting?:derpytongue2:

Wrong. Disco is dead. Even in Chicago.

1603164 you can own any gun in Colorado :scootangel:

1633233 a am serious, and don't call me shirley

i completely respect you now and i take back any thing i said in that fight this
story is impressive this it the type of human i like:rainbowdetermined2:

I doubt.
Therefore, "I think.
Therefore, I am."
~René Descartes
Sometimes it is good to question one's self.

Making next chapter in my story. Hope yo make another one here.

I hope for some good headwinds on your journey.

man this is why im going to stick to one shots

you write a chater fic but run out of idea

i just puvlish everything into one big chapter or meny smal chapters but wait to submit the stroy until you are sure it willl be good

sory about my advice

I would give you spelling advice- but I don't have time for that.

made me giggle ergo thumbs up! :3 sweet fic

oh and thanks again for reading alicorn

...but it was such a good story!

2304764 Biggest problem is if I don't know where to go with it, it can't get interesting.


how about you figure it our before you write it that always works brain storm multiple random ideas and thought your head plan them out piece by piece on whats going to happen next you always need a starting point and and edging point you need to know what to write in the bigining and the end but the middle you just fill out and make it make sense with the ending and bigining in the story hope i helped


You could always ask for the help of the other authors.

.... Really? Forgive me for being rude on this, but that is kinda pathetic, giving up so easily.
Just put it on hiatus for fuck sakes. Give it time. Sooner or later, something will pop up.
Just. Give. It. Time.

It ain't that hard. Be it a month, or a year, something should come up.
Good things come to those who wait.

2310675 Meh, it's a collab. And I found it quite boring and didn't really enjoy writing it as much as my other stories.

2310825 Then deviate and go completely random on its ass.
I don't care if you somehow make this "Spitfire" pregnant. Hell, it would make for an interesting twist. Or that, do a complete no scope 360 and floor it.

If not that, then gun down Spitfire with bullets.

2311502 You have a point, I'll probably do something.

2312559 Like I said, give it time.
Time is the key word here. Don't rush it mate. Hell, I've been through worse writer's block before, where I have seen writers lose almost all the will to continue writing their story. The next, even years later, they are back at it.

Don't be so impatient, for that will be your downfall.

"not like the changes an average Call of Duty player is going to have in six years" Nice.

A funny thing about the number of flights that you've mentioned thus far is that your airspace is still a wee bit quiet for the number of heavily traversed routes that have been crossed. :derpytongue2:

2470412 You're right. Not to mention the bravo airspace at the beginning.

2471672 Regardless of the details, I do like how you've made the skies alive. It's something often missing with pegasus on earth fictions. :facehoof:

The bravo sequence was took as a "Dude, I'm an A-10 fanatic. I don't even have to explain this." type of bit. It strangely fits in when one thinks about it though. The lower stall speed in combination with durability/noise makes for a better escort with an unknown magical sapient that lacks communication ability in a non-threatening vector over munitions testing ranges with standing orders such as what has been indicated by other collab fics. Their total silence threw me off, as I would expect at least morse code.

Anyways, I can't wait to see how this turns out! :twilightsheepish:

2472099 You can fly into MOAs( Military Ops Areas) in real life without clearance. I was referring to Bravo Airspace in the beginning. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Airspace_class

2472895 I must admit that I'm ground crew with a bit of an armchair passion for flight. The classes do make sense though...

I wasn't aware of the lax handling around the testing ranges. :rainbowderp:

(Sorry, winding down for the evening and my brain's coasting to a halt...)

Wonderful update.
It's like you never left. :pinkiehappy:

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