• Member Since 12th Oct, 2012
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TLSpark


Think Freely my Friends!

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((Believe it or not, I actually regret making this years later, but I'm leaving it up for posterity's sake than anything. I hope you enjoy it even though I have no idea why you should))

I am a soldier. There's just no other way to describe me. Since the day of my birth, I've been thrust into the life of a killer on the battlefield. And unfortunately for me, I'm good at what I do. I don't even know what we're fighting about anymore. I want to just give up. I want to die. But the day I finally see peace in the shape of an orange pony is the day I question myself in ways I didn't think possible.

*********************** (Now edited for grammar and split up into chapters)

A different take on the "Soldier in Equestria" genre. I may or may not write an Epilogue for this someday.

Inspired heavily by "The youth in the garden" written by The Descendant.

Teen for minor gore

Image from the internet

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 8 )

That was a bittersweet ending. Nice job! :ajsmug:

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Well...thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

I'm surprised to actually find a comment on here! :rainbowlaugh:

Geez. Knew this was coming, but I liked it.

I enjoyed the dialogue. Well written.

This chapter was great. I'm loving it.

Well written. I loved it.

I know the story's been done for awhile but its really good.
Made me cry. :pinkiesad2:

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I'm glad this story can still bring the feels after all this time.

Thanks for reading it mate :rainbowdetermined2:

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