• Member Since 29th Sep, 2012
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Pony-Berserker


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Josh had never heard of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic until he woke up as a pony.


But being a pony isn't his biggest worry now. He also seems to be paralyzed. And to make the matter worse, he is not alone in the room...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 40 )

This is my first story including any human. I know that "a man wakes up as a pony" is an overdone trope but give it a chance. I think you will enjoy it. You can be sure that my stories don't follow overused cliche plots :raritywink:

I get the title reference...
(first like)

...what?

I don't even know how to react....

:applejackconfused:

Very well written, absolutely hilarious, and... That ending!:rainbowlaugh:
Have a like and a gold star.

That... Was awkward.

My grilfriend turned out to be a perv who likes watching men banging sex dolls.

"My girlfriend."

This was weird as Hell. And that's not something I say very often.

Of course it's Discord's fault :rainbowlaugh:
Great story.

Fuckers gonna die.

of all the people, this guys friends and girlfriend had to be the most messed up Bronies. Funny, but, i am slightly disturbed, ah well.

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Eh... first story with a human in it? A comedy about rape? Well... I suppose all I could suggest to improve it is to simply delete it. :pinkiesmile:

1525731

I don't think it's that bad. There are much more likes... :pinkiecrazy:

1526688

Hey, ya goin' for 4 upvotes to every downvote. You're going good so far.

Have another upvote!

•canned laughter•
"That's our bronies!"

1527774
There was a game from the 90's called "I have no mouth and I must scream"
What is the title?

1528259 You didn't properly get it, that game was based off of a short story by Harlan Elisson called I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream

1528910 OOOOOOHHHHH no wonder I didn't know it.

“Josh says he’s not here!” Dave shouted through the door and then facepalmed.

xD

1525731 If that's the case, I think this should have a 'Mature' rating.

1534661

Nothing is described explicitly, it's only implied.

1534677 Still kind of questionable, in my opinion. But it's your fic.

1534686

Well, teens know what a rape is. It's not described and it's just a few sentences in the end about it. I don't think it really qualifies as "mature".

Interesting fic with the theme "lack of self control" with many layers of metaphors.

At first I was like...

"LETS CHECK THIS BADBOY OUT" :pinkiecrazy:

And then I was like...

"Holy shet?????????????? :rainbowderp:"

1579099

I guess you didn't like it.

Well, the story was supposed to be at least confusing :trollestia:

1579115

Who said I didnt like it? HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM? :trollestia:

1579125

Well, my bad. I misinterpreted the comment :twilightblush:

Dafuq did I just read.

Highly disturbing.
But intriguing.
Moar?

1616193

Moar?

I think it's not a good idea to write explicitly what happened with the kendo sword and these two idiots :rainbowwild:

Allied mastercomputer approved

This sounds like a story for Josh Kash

1623202
Revenge. Revenge happened.

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