• Member Since 3rd Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen Jul 23rd, 2013


Just your average writer. 14, freshman, and about two months being a brony. I absolutely HATE shipping, excluding the occasional Fluttermac or OC.


It's bathtime for some of the young characters, and who else but you gets to wash them? Each filly and colt has a different personality, though, and some of them REALLY hate baths!

Cover by ~strabArybrick on deviantart

Because of the CT limit, I used the "other" tag. But keep in mind that there will be many ponies here.

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Hehe, baths. Imma scrub th' buck outta Derpy!

You know, I don't even like second person fics, but this was too cute!

Can't wait to read more.

I like this. It's heartwarming.

Pinkie Pie's bath reminds of a young Sonic in Sonic Underground when he had to take a bath, lol now I know what Rainbow Dash is going to be like. :rainbowlaugh:

Bahaha this is so wonderfully random. Good work :rainbowlaugh:

"Pinkie, no riding dog-riding in the house!" <- I'm confused.

Other than that, short n sweet. :pinkiehappy:

This is a very entertaining concept and i can only wonder what the other characters will be like.
I will be excited when you do RD and (if you decide to) Spitfire and Vinyl.
Cant wait for the next chapter.

1522152 *Fixed, thanks!:rainbowkiss:

As for everyone else, who should I do next? I was kinda thinking Luna, but will gladly take requests.:moustache::eeyup:

You reach into the water and pick up the fillies little butt, telling her to keep it there for a second. She nods and gathers her breath, sticking her head underwater. You shake your head and laugh a bit at the foolish little Pinkie.

I half expected a clopper's response.:pinkiecrazy:

Can I get a link to that cover's source?
I need to know the artist.

I think it would have been funny for there to be inexplicable objects left in the bath (presumably left after being washed out of her mane). Things such as cakes, balls, balloons, and somehow an alligator toy.


Not like that will stop some people.

Anyway, writing a story about giving foal canon characters baths is one of the weirdest concepts I've see. So good job.


Ooooh so this supposed to insert the reader into the story...


as oppose to their parents...


I am sorry but this idea reminds me of that pathetic idiot from "My little Dashie":pinkiesick:


Well, I don't think it'd be cute if Pinkie's Amish parents gave her a bath. Plus putting the reader in the story increases the cute factor. And don't you DARE insult My Little Dashie. That fic was pure genius, nothing less:flutterrage:

I know, but I'm keeping my fingers crossed!:pinkiesmile::unsuresweetie:


Lol, I wonder if little "Woona" would be harder or little Celestia, I could see the sun pony having a somewhat pouty/stubborn side, not to mention an aversion to water.

Also I now really want somebrony to pmv this song,

also Bert loved trolling Ernie before it was even a term :yay:

Giving fillies baths? Do Fluttershy Next. That can only lead to untold levels of adorable.

Yeah my next one was a tie between her and Luna. Looks like it'll be Flutters!:yay:

Well, I don't think it'd be cute if Pinkie's Amish parents gave her a bath. Plus putting the reader in the story increases the cute factor. And don't you DARE insult My Little Dashie. That fic was pure genius, nothing less

I don't hate your writing of your story, I only hate the idea

and for My little Dashie, I cant't properly hate it since, as a writing, is not bad at all, but is hugely overrated, and the human protagonist is beyond any level of cheesyness and pathetic

1522955 HOW COULD YOU HATE MY LITTLE DASHIE!? :flutterrage:


1522853 :twilightoops:

If Fluttershy commands...

No questions asked.


Dohohoh, oh dat slaps me on the knee.

Looking forward to more! :twilightsmile:

I'm sooo jelly right now

I knew Fluttershy was going to melt my heart.

I'm still expecting Rainbow and Twilight to do so as well though.

Carry on with your fine story good sir.

1522328 You should do RD next. That'd be really funny!

why isn't this featured yet?

Doctor: It's just as I feared. This man is overdosed on cute.

*Lays on the ground twitching*

Nurse: What do we do doctor?

Doctor: ..... coffee break?

Nurse: Sure.

*Doctor and nurse leave*

Me: ......too.....cute....*dies*

The cuteness levels...



So cute. And I was sorry, because I accidentally got soap in her eye... WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME!?:fluttershbad:

I hate to be the party pooper here, but-

It's spelled Pegasus, not Pegasis.:pinkiesmile:

Now that that is settled, HNNNNNG!:twilightoops:


AHHHHHHH :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:
The cuteness ... it BURNS. AND I LOVE IT. Please continue xD

You forgot to put fluttershy in the 'characters' section after adding her :fluttershysad:

HNNNG! that was so cute, my favorite scene was with the rubber duck! Carry on my good man!
Also In before feature :pinkiehappy:

Dashie's next, and hopefully I'll get it done by the end of tomorrow, but I can't make promises!:twilightsheepish:

I'm planning on making Twilight, Luna and Applejack a co-op with Shining Armor, Celestia and Big Mac. I-if that's okay

I wanna scrub Sweetie Belle :unsuresweetie:

Wow, I really amaze myself when I set realistic goals, because then I do the task faster than the normal goals.:pinkiehappy: Anyways, enjoy scrubbing Dashie, the little dickens:rainbowkiss:!

Do Rarity next, I wonder how well she'll cooperate. :duck:

I can tell Applejack will put up a fight and I don't know how well Twilight will react. :eeyup:


Oh yea........ if your gonna have us do Applejack, at least give us some safety tips so we don't have to plan a visit to the hospital after that bath..... although it would be somewhat interesting to me to see more scenarios the ponies could be in.

1535220 Well don't try to fight Applejack head on cause she'll just buck you, but other than that I don't really think I can offer you any advice. Applejack may like getting dirty but that doesn't mean she'll refuse to take any sort of bath. :unsuresweetie:

That's kinda why I want Big Mac to help:eeyup:. He could set her straight:applejackunsure:

Filly Dashie + Cape? Cuteness Overload :heart:

At least when its Rarities turn should be rather easy...
Unless of course she ends up somehow having to share her bath with somefilly like Applejack for some reason.

Maybe it was a nice day out after a rainstorm and little Rarity found a nice spot to sun herself.... that just so happened to be near the garden little Aj was working on. :rainbowwild::raritycry:

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