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I want to know what she ordered. <3

Also great story. :D

Cupcake Golem....Epic.....Sooooo Epic...
I must know what she ordered!

You made me laugh my YAYing:flutterrage: ass off. Congrats on the great story!

gotta love pinkie :pinkiehappy: , also awesome doctor whooves refrence!

The bees were the crowning moment of funny for me. :rainbowlaugh:

No NOT THE BEES AGGGH!
:facehoof:
I enjoyed it.

Dash ordered a [insert sex toy]:pinkiehappy:
But it might also be something that she wouldn't like anyone else seeing, like a makeup or something girly.

haha awesome story :pinkiehappy: almost lost it at the bee part :pinkiehappy:

BEES! SO MANY BEES! NOT IN THE EYES! BEES!

and i think rainbow dash ordered some Playcolt...

if you catch my drift...

Bees... my god! <- Props to anyone getting that reference :rainbowlaugh:
I know what it was in that package, it was.. Oh hi Pinkie, what's up?... Equestria in danger? LET'S GO :rainbowdetermined2: *Superpony theme*

-Glassed

BEEEEEEEEEEEEEES

I wanna know what Rainbow ordered. Ya know, Rainbow Dash does always dress in style, maybe it was a super neat hat. It would've been nice to at least hint at what she got.

The fic was really confusing, I had to skim through it a second time to understand it. I liked it though!

Poor Ditzy/Derpy/Bright Eyes....she's going to get an earful for this.

106011 That reference was from one of Linkaras reviews right? The Batman meets Spawn one?

I'm betting Rainbow Dash ordered wonderbolts plushies. Because I would totally do that if I were her, and because that would totally be my reaction.
Also, because I do not have a sick mind in the slightest, no sir-ee. Now if youll excuse me, I need a minute in my bunk.

(THE BEES, THEY STING JUSTIN!)

#15 · Jan 3rd, 2012 · · ·

it would have made more sense if spike ate the golem

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Combining those two: It was a set of Wonderbolt plushies with SPAs/SPHs.

105853 or the latest copy of "Wing Boner" magazine.

I bet Rainbow Dash ordered some liquid rainbow.

See if you can catch the fanfic reference there.

ME TRACK AWESOME STORY WANT MOAR :pinkiecrazy:

Oh Dash...why must you order strange things.

Great story :twilightsmile:

106487 I thought of Converging Fronts when I read that, but I doubt that'd be it.

Lol, since I read that fic I immediately had some strange thoughts of what would be in that box

The box contained her secret hamburger that she needed for her secret hamburger addiction. It's all Pinkie's fault, she brought one through after going to MickeyD's with a slight detour through 'some wall'. She's scared that someone is going to figure out her craving and the only reason Pinkie lied about not opening it is because she sent it to Dash in the first place.
Also, Pinkie's many travels also brought glue to Equestria in secret. Nopony knows what's in it.
Glue and burgers are in the box.
:pinkiehappy: :rainbowderp: The end.
Awesome story!

Cool story, although the not knowing of what was in the box is going to drive me crazier.

Whats in the package:rainbowderp: if you don't reply I will assume it's a block of wensleydale...

This reminds me of Doctor Who, The Wicker Man, and The Justin Bieber Show from HArry Partridge. I love this short tale of comedy!:rainbowlaugh:

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A lacy pink frilly dress, what else would embarrass her like that? A sex toy? :rainbowlaugh:

#29 · Jan 4th, 2012 · · ·

"NO, SIMON, DON'T TURN ON THE BEE MACHINE!"
...
"WHY'D YOU TURN ON THE BEE MACHINE!?"

"I like bees! :fluttercry:"

dash probably ordered 50 pounds of porno cds knowing her:rainbowlaugh:

#31 · Jan 4th, 2012 · · ·

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I was thinking of the second one :rainbowwild:
Also, was the Doctor Whooves reference combined with a 'Who's On First' reference? :twistnerd:

Ludicrous speed!

The hell..? :rainbowhuh:

the Cakes open the box

mr cake, "WHAT?"
mrs cake, "..........might keep it"
rainbow dash, " :rainbowderp: .....i can explain....."

#35 · Jan 4th, 2012 · · ·

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Probably a lot of porn and a sex toy.:rainbowderp:

... Am I the onlypony who's wondering where all the bees ended up?:applejackconfused:

#37 · Jan 4th, 2012 · · ·

I wonder if Twilight teleported the bees to the moon.:trollestia:

#39 · Jan 4th, 2012 · · ·

"Everypony, eat now while he’s cupcakes!" LOL :rainbowlaugh:
Also Fluttershy... SHE KNOWS!

I can just hear Wheatley from Portal 2 going BIRD! BIRD! BIRD!!
Except it's spike screaming about bees O_O
Pretty funny, but I really wish you told us what it was she was expecting... and why Fluttershy knew about it...
She didn't seem to want Ditzy to know what it was, either...
Oh, and also. DAMN IT, SCOOTALOO! WATCH WHERE YOU RIDE THAT THING!!

106011 Fluttershy ordered a deadly bee weapon? someone call batmare

106011 Fluttershy ordered a deadly bee weapon? someone call batmare

#43 · Jan 4th, 2012 · · ·

106214 Nice Harry Partridge reference! x3

#44 · Jan 5th, 2012 · · ·

what did she order?

She probably got some "interesting" pictures of Fluttershy. If ya know what I mean. ;)

Whats in the box, Whats In The Box,WHATS IN THE BOX, WHATS IN THE GOD DAMN BOX!!!:flutterrage:

Maybe Dash's package is in fact a pony!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3711/Special-Delivery

She got someone else interested in the idea of being "shipped" and she's desperate to get them out of the box!

Fluttershy however already knows and Pinkie...is very playful and good at intuition. :pinkiehappy:

#48 · Jan 5th, 2012 · · ·

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I was thinking that too, from the first moment I read the description. When it started out with Dash, not in a box, I was suddenly confused as to where the fic was going, but I liked it anyway!

good job. A very funny, skillfully written fic.
Need to know what is in that box! :twilightangry2:
My first thought was kinda dirty, but i hope that it is just something really girly...

:rainbowlaugh:
Great. Fantastic.

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