• Member Since 27th Sep, 2012
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Soaking Wet

I am a part-time writer who has been consumed both by the magic of ponies and the enchanting mystery of their sexuality.

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I'll read this in a bit or whatever.

that. is SO. hot.

1520694 So yeah... Read it now.


For one, I like this style, is there a name for it? Where everything written is only one character's dialogue.
For two, is this your own original character? Back story and appearance and everything, because she's really hot!
For three, one thing I like about this style of writing is that it leaves quite a bit up to the imagination.
Which also leads me to another point, it shows us bronies how depraved we are, being able to imagine clop scenes
from one characters dialogue alone, albeit the dialogue was a bit more descriptive than the typical kind.

Fifty shades of hay... Lol!:derpytongue2:

Well this definitely looks interesting.

So someone created a character for you that was nice of him.

Your lucky to have someone as nice as that as your special somepony and he is lucky to have you.


I think you mean "she," my dear. :raritywink:


Thank you! I'm not sure if there is a name for this style, but it's something I experimented with years ago when I tried to get into poetry. I think this is my first attempt at actually putting it into use in a story. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though. I wanted to make it so any reader could put him or herself in the hooves of the student, while also learning about me in the process.

Soaking Wet is my original character, but as I said in the caption, I cannot take sole credit for her development. My special somepony first came up with her during our conversations - he even made a quite detailed bio and the OC image from the picture on the cover. It was so romantic, I couldn't wait to flesh his idea out into a complete story to make her come alive.

Wh...where can I sign up for this class? :twilightblush:


I second this notion...

So you cut out all of the stuff that makes good porn good and just kept all of the cheesy sex dialogue?...

Like, if a partner were to actually say to me "Look at me while I x", "Watch me as I y", etc. it would be a complete mood-killer. And that's with me actually being able to watch them x-ing and y-ing, instead of just hearing their voice. That dialogue is among the chief reasons that I find conventional pornography laughable.

I do not like

I LOVE! :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

That's completely normal.


Yes, I meant she.
Wow, I'm sorry about that. You left me an even greater impression. :o
Honestly, I did not expect a female to be writing these types of things-but hell, more power to you!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.


I understand how that can be a turn-off, but remember my character is a professor. I am teaching you, young grasshopper. :raritywink:


Not a problem, good sir, and thank you. I didn't think of making much of my gender, but somepony found it out.

Now I'm enjoying myself even more. :yay:


Just keep up the good work, you have a very fine imagination. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

I'm a unicorn but I suck at magic. Maybe I improved?


1522292 Time for a more in-depth review of this.

...Wow, where to begin! This is such a perfect one-shot that I'm deeply disappointed that it is. :fluttercry:
I'll start off by saying that I wish that I had a teacher like Soaking Wet, so nice...and from the picture shot, so attractive. I can draw her if you can send me a full body shot. :raritywink: (Shut up)

You made this gender neutral, which I'm thoroughly impressed with. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
This story was so fun to read, because you made such an interesting character. You want to know about her, and about her life. You want to be there with her as you're taking the 'entrance exam...' //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png ...and you want to please her more even after you're done. This is the kind of story that needs to have it's own following. I say, I will volunteer my time into writing more stories about her if need be. Then again, you have my support no matter what. :twilightblush:

Cheers for plot!


1522738 Sigh...

Do we have to make this point (again)?

I never understood why people feel the need to post "I'll read it later"....who are you talking to, exactly? Who cares that you're going to read it later instead of now? :rainbowhuh:

1521388 Oh... oh!

I just thought of something I could compare this to.
It's like being the customer on a phone sex hotline, though slightly different.

1523610 Actually, that was me being a jerk and taking first comment... Sorry.


Most def, brah. This is the most interested I've been in a purely OC fic in years! CT has a gift and I hope to Celestia he never stops using it.


Dude... you missed the point a-freakin-gain!

"hope to Celestia he never stops"
"to Celestia he never"
"Celestia he"

Castortroy is a "she".
"She" "She" "She" "She" "She" "She" "She" "She"


It's okay, I can see why it's confusing. After all, my username is the same as Nicolas Cage's character in "Face/Off." I remember when I was younger thinking he was so sexy in that movie. I wanted to be the choir girl whose ass he grabbed at the beginning of the film!

Mmm, just thinking about it makes me so wet. :raritystarry:

It's definitely different. Not bad, but something's missing...


I'm glad you enjoyed it, Jexxy!

It is true that this is a one-shot --- for now. :raritywink: I don't know how or when, but I'd be perfectly happy to do something more with her. Not quite sure what that would be yet, but if you have any ideas, definitely let me know. :twilightsmile:


Thank you! This is actually my first experience in working with an OC, as I've resisted bringing OCs into my "Goddess Within" stories. But fortunately I received just the right inspiration to introduce her to you all. And since there's so much of myself in the character as a result, I get a thrill letting others see this side of me. :raritywink:

1523745 Waitwaitwaitwait...Castortroy is a she!?
This is news to me, but ahlrighty! Maybe TwilightClopple won't feel so alone then!

1524301 Nicholas Cage you say?


There are quite a few of them actually.



OMG, I've never seen that pic before! Can't say I've enjoyed his new stuff, but "Face/Off" still gives me tingles.

1524368 TwilightClopple and Butterscotchsundae for example.

1524493 TAW is a girl too? Where does it say that?


I'm sure you're one.
Didn't know mares could write such professional clopfix....


All it really takes to write a good clopfic, I believe, is a thorough enjoyment of all things sexual, a thesaurus, and a plan for what you're going to do to yourself after you finish writing.

In that sense, I think just about any guy or girl has the ability to write something that will make anypony else's underwear drip with fresh cum. It just comes down to having the confidence to discover that part of yourself and then embrace it without hesitation.

At least that's my thought. :twilightsmile:

1524517 Mares write the best clopfics. Dunno what you're talking about!


Holy damn you have an imagination. Nice way of putting it,

having the confidence to discover that part of yourself and then embrace it without hesitation

Damn, you put that really really well. And that, my friends, is why I read your stuff.


CastorTroy is the first mare whose clopfix I've read. :twilightsmile:

Why are all the best clopfic writers on this site girls? Screw this, if you keep making good clop like this, I might just click that follow button.


Easy, Bromide, I didn't know. Although that is surprising to say the least. Hmmm... :ajsmug:


I love getting the sense that I have aroused your---intrigue, gentlemen. :raritywink:

I love the way this was written. The lack of fine details lets the imagination kind of have its way with the story while still progressing linearly. I love your work.


Why, thank you! I know some people don't like ambiguity in details, but I'm glad readers like yourself were able to suit it to your interests.

There's nothing better than a good imagination. :twilightsmile:

Did someone say.... Gentlemen?

I also keep picturing you as your avatar of Anthro Twilight in bed and that book she's holding is magic and can surf the internet.


That's a perfectly acceptable way for you to imagine me, good sir.

In a way, it's not all that far from reality. :twilightsmile:


Can't say you didn't, CT.
... you have a coltfriend or anything?

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