It's Cold Out

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Fifteen years after a tragic death shrouds the quaint town of Ponyville in sorrow, a dying stallion returns from the past.

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Comment posted by Cinnamon Pop deleted Dec 21st, 2012

InkTapper

InkTapper #2 · Dec 21st, 2012 · 1 · ·

I don't care what anyone says, this is a stroke of genius. Grammar and writing techniques could use some fixing, but the overall message is just beautiful! I can't believe you've gotten all these dislikes, my guess is that there are a lot of us with paths similar to the one here, or maybe some people only read fanfics and watch MLP to escape from the cruelty of the world, and your story just reminded them that it exists, but personally I love the splash of cruel reality every now and then. Please keep it up, no matter how discouraging the rate bar gets!

BaliBriant

BaliBriant #3 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · ·

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It means an illimitable amount to me that you liked this. I worked very hard on it. I think this would be better as a longer story, with a less rushed narrative, but if I do eventually do that it will be much later. I probably won't be attempting anything as ambitious as this in the near future, my writing skills need honing, but I thank you for your encouragement.

angleofdeath

angleofdeath #4 · Dec 29th, 2012 · 1 · ·

damn it you portrayed it so vividly I was on the verge of tears

BaliBriant

BaliBriant #5 · Dec 29th, 2012 · · ·

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Thank you! Funny that you should find this story after it has been off of the front page for so long. I was beginning to think I'd be going 4:5 forever.

Rainboom_Flash