After weeks and weeks of convincing, Rarity finally decides to take a day off and ride a roller coaster with her friends, but what ends up happening on the ride is something nopony could've ever predicted.
As I stroke each letter key The only thing that concerns me Is that my fingers dance so well To create a perfect story to tell
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ATTENTION: Hey guys, thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed! Originally this story was going to be longer, but I realized it would make more sense if broken up into a one-shot series. I won't give away spoilers but the plan I have involves a certain pony -----> <----- co-starring aside Rarity and an insane story that still revolves around this roller coaster. At the same time, this story seems to do well as an enjoyable one-time thing. Just want your input.
Would you, as the reader, be interested in reading the adventure that takes place after Rarity discovers this "new form of relaxation"? (It won't get anywhere close to cloppy, I promise)
:3 gigity
Pinkie: Rarity, they just opened up a new roller coaster if you want to come.
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very good
As a roller coaster fan, the ride sounds epic
Not bad. Rarity...What can I say?
Erm...that's not the kind of fun you're supposed to have on a rollercoaster
And I guess obligatory:
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It's official.
Rarity x Roller Coaster. RariCoaster?
Either way, they are fuck buddies now.
Well that was... interesting?
Nicely written though, so well done on that front.
Well, ok then. Not quite sure how to respond to that...
The next one must feature an epic duel to the death between the Mustang and Tom for Rarity's affections.
So like Emerald Flight said, she came?
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Or they could have a threesome: strap Tom into a seat. What could possibly go wrong?
reminds me of a vid i once saw, except that the ride was one of the slingshot rides and the guy was fully aware of what just happened
I guess you could say that her friends convinced her to cum on the roller coaster.
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Well played sir...................
1513916 perhaps you could have her trying to get her friends back to the theme park and trying to get back on the roller coaster while trying to hide her excitement
oh LAWL. That... that That was one HELL OF A RIDE!
God, how is a guy supposed to compete with a rollercoaster like THAT? Im amazed no one noticed her mess in the cart or the smell that would grow over time on her coat and tail as she made her way home xD (may have stopped at the little fillies room to freshen up I suppose) oh man that was an exciting read lol the descriptions of what she went through were all too well detailed lol seriously, wings were sprung during this read lol
I can't help but laugh at the description of that brown colt with the noodle like mane as being a ponified version of your avatar :P
Wow. I'm actually kind of sad that I'm not a girl if that's what THEY get out of roller coasters.
1514141 That's from the Season 3 opener if I'm not mistaken, and of course everyone including Pinkie Pie seemed to be shocked by Rarity suddenly losing it, before long that will the new dramatic Rarity complete with "I'll swallow your soul!"
1514526 Agreed!
1515234 You do know you're never suppose to say that right, whenever someone says that things always go wrong.
Seanessy, I HAVE to thank you for what you have done.
After I read this Roller coaster fan-fic I somehow started thinking about
the Final Destination movie series, probably because the movie with the Roller coaster.
So after about two hours of brain storming I have got to say I probably just came
up with the BEST Final Destination fan fiction ever! I'm writing it right now and I
have to say that the 'Big Accident' I have planned is going to blow yours and everyone
else's minds.
that was........Something..... But it was funny!
1514111 haha giggty giggty alright
Yay. That was a highly enjoyable read!
Not sure you even CAN come from a roller coaster.
That said, very cute and funny, good show.
OH MY!
I knew this was going to be a great story the moment I saw that hilarious cover art.