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Art Inspired


8000 soldiers!

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I had to go through immense changes, like over nine thousand to be exact, AFTER SwiperTheFox finished editing it, so if anyone finds any mistakes or grammar errors, please, let me know in the comments. Don't blame the editor.

I shall promote this in a bit. For now, time to read!

It shall be promoted.

Wanderer D
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I find this story oddly compelling. :pinkiecrazy:

...Dat ending

Greatly written and an amusing story. I thank you sir :twilightsmile:

1516411 Thank you, actually!:pinkiehappy:

You are quite welcome sir. :scootangel: And I have a question to ask. How do you reply to comments like that?? Everytime I try it just shows up with numbers and I can't do it right :raritydespair:

1516432 That's what's supposed to happen.

Oh...well then...thank you again :twilightblush:

1516511 I've worked hard on it. So... yeah... You might say that.:ajsleepy:

I like the idea of this story. It's pretty interesting. And the characters are all just amazing.

(after reading) I liked it. Sometimes I thought your word choice was a bit harsh, but overall this was a pretty very nice piece of work. And really damn interesting. Took the idea of right and wrong and gay and straight and twisted it into a weird, indecipherable ball of sexyness.

Fab’s mouth recreated to say, “I’m glad you’re enjoying it.”

I do believe you meant "Fab's mouth retreated to say" if i see anymore i'll post another review

1516738 Thanks, it's been fixed.

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someone, anyone, call 911 before i die! :rainbowlaugh:

That story was oddly arousing. Good read, nonetheless. Not usually something I read, but it was awesome in a weird kinda way.
:pinkiehappy:

1516954 I'm not usually one for three-ways or anything like that, but I honestly enjoyed this one.
:pinkiesmile:

I had the normalest boner

1517181 not sarcasm, just proper tense use

1517214 Hehe, well, anyways, glad you enjoyed the story!:pinkiehappy:

Awesome, hope it gets feautured. :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy:

1517417 I was contemplating on continuing it... but only if it gets featured. And if it does,
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I'm a fan of this Mirrors Frame character.

1517517 You don't say?!:rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:

Btw, did you catch the Nick Cage reference in the story?

1516833 Anime: Where you can drown someone in blood with a paper cut.....:trollestia:

1517691 Your comment just killed nine boners, for sure.:ajbemused:

1517701
intentional aims meet? maybe. Satisfied with results given? you bet!

1517701
besides, there are 50 comments before that. if they haven't read it by the time they reached the vid, they never were to begin with

1517727 That's why I said nine. I calculated the precise numeric odds that at least nine people will see that video.

1517738
:rainbowlaugh: I want to see those calculations please

1517773 They're done in my head.

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Oh well, no interesting calculations to wonder at then I suppose :pinkiesad2:. in the mean time, if you decide to turn this into a chapter fic as opposed to the one shot it is, I will remove the comment

Not sure what this is.... It's Art Inspired, however, so it should be good....

1515918 I only found

that reviled Fabric’s curious desire.

when I assume you meant revealed Fabric's curious desire.

Wanderer D
Moderator

1517517 He does have some charm, however I am more partial to Swift Drifter, seems like a suave and handsome guy. Reminds me a bit of Tony Stark for some reason.

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