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For her entire life, Twilight Sparkle has looked up to Princess Celestia as a teacher, mentor, and role model. At no time was she forbidden from asking for advice when troubled by a problem. As she grows up, however, her problems grow far more complex, and far less scholarly, in nature. Will she still be able to seek her mentor's advice on more intimate matters? What sort of advice can an eternal princess offer a young mare?

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[This story was written before Season 3. Picture Twilight as a unicorn or alicorn as you wish; it works out the same way.]

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Comments ( 21 )

Great short story! I really like the idea of their relationship growing as Twilight does.. and the vague details of Celestia's love life don't hurt!

1512004 Also I love how made it so that when Twilight said "My...horn...uhhh...went off.” she really meant it and it wasn't a metaphor for her losing her virgnity as one would think. :rainbowlaugh:

This story is well written and has a very strong structure, nice job! :pinkiehappy:

hilarious and heartwarming, a good read. :twilightsmile:

Very well written, but I do believe that inhibitor rings are more or less common among unicorns, and even more so in the police force, to restrain unicorn criminals.

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I don't remember any references to them in the series, but I can change it if necessary. Maybe they're hard to come by for civilians.

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Magic inhibitors are never brought up in the series, but they are incredibly common in fan-fiction. It's not surprising that some fans would falsely assume they exist in the show.

Wow. This story is a pretty darn good. You might want to add a comedy tag into it.

Who do you think created the Everfree Forest?

That... cracked... me... up... so ...hard....

The dialogue was nice, as well as the exposition. I wanna see more!

Twilight smiled despite herself. “Amazing. We do so much together—talking, studying, going for walks in the woods. I’m still spending time with my other friends of course, but I’m having so much fun. During last week’s meteor shower we had a picnic in this small clearing in the middle of Whitetail Wood to watch, just the two of us. It was so wonderful! And I’ve been promised a private dinner when I get home tomorrow evening.”

- Missing preposition in bold.

But this is a really good one short story, it'd be interesting to see conversations that follow this one, either between Twilight and Celestia or two other ponies.

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Agghhh, I thought I got them all! Thanks for the correction!

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Thanks! :scootangel:

I probably won't be adding to this story, but I have a couple others I'm working on.

1571672 :pinkiehappy: That's great! and thanks again for the fav on remembering the fallen!

This is a superb little piece; intimate and playful at the same time. You really managed to capture and use the voices of both Twilight and Celestia very well.

I am so very jealous of your easy skill with their dialogue~

I'd love to see more of this, or fics like it. :twilightsmile:

More people need to see this, so I'll be taking the liberty of adding it to some more groups...
:fluttershyouch: ...um, if that's okay with you.

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By all means! Thanks :twilightsmile:

Congratulations! Your story has good enough grammar to be included in the Good Grammar Directory, a comprehensive list of grammatically correct stories on Fimfiction!

3072920 Sorry, didn't notice this comment until now. Thank you very much!

Stay tuned; I hope to add a story or two in the coming months.

Nice story... though it was the bit about the creation of the Everfree what really got you the green thumb :trollestia:

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It's a shame this is the only thing you've written. I laughed a lot, and it was very cute. :D

i love Regal in Discretion .   it goes with a my  commissioned  story.

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