• Member Since 23rd Oct, 2012
  • offline last seen January 3rd

The Princess Rarity

Quirky teenage girl who writes about cartoons & has an obsession with sparkly things & cute dorks. Goes through life following by Dr. Seuss's wise words; "You have to be odd to be number one."


Scootaloo used to be part of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, but now that both Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom finally got their own cutie marks, Scootaloo is all alone. She's just one Crusader. That's not fun. But she's determined to join her friends; by doing anything possible to get that beloved mark; so she won't be a blank flank anymore...

However, will Scootaloo's idol, the amazing Rainbow Dash, teach her a lesson she'll never forget; making her realize something important? And what will that lead to?

Story was inspired by the cover art; which, in turn, was stolen from the Equestria Daily.

Cowritten by RushingAutumnLeaves.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 44 )

I love this..............:pinkiesad2:

its alright...
Anyonee ever notice how Twilight's teeth here ----->:twilightangry2: look like tusks? And the thing on the cover page that said Scootaloo is involved. Anyone notice her eyes are a lot smaller than her real eyes?

D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! Uh.. I mean... Uh.... Gnarly!

Not a bad story, but... Meh :applejackunsure:

ITS SO BEAUTIFUL! :raritycry:

Short and adorable :pinkiesmile:

This is lovely - I haven't read something like this in a long time. :twilightsmile: Everything seems to be Grimdark these days.:raritycry:
Well done. Have a moustache.:moustache:

Thank you, everypony, for liking this and commenting :pinkiehappy: It means the world to me.

Soo sweet:fluttercry: I haven't cried this mutch scince I read my litte dashie:applecry::raritydespair::raritycry:

Why if I weren't a sucker for a happy ending, I wouldn't have liked this story as much as I do now. Good job, bravo and all that good jaz.


1510492 Wow! Th-th-thank you! I'm shocked! :pinkiegasp:
1510503 Thank you and I just wanna say... YOUR PROFILE PIC IS SO CUTE :rainbowkiss:

It's a nice story and all but...why did she get her cm? I mean, she crashed and then cried about it...I could see her getting it for making the jump, maybe Dash sort of forcing her to try the jump again, but just randomly getting it for crashing?:rainbowhuh:
Ah well still nice and worth a thumb.:twilightsmile:

1510520 Twilight got hers for not being able to get a grip until the last second...:pinkiecrazy:

True...but she essentially erupted with magic...High level failing vs low level failing I guess.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

The feels, they've overpowered me!

1510520 Well, me and my cowriter decided to give Scootaloo her cutie mark because she's waited so long for it and that she tried so hard to get it. She deserved it because, even though she cried, she accepted that she failed. (Really cheesy reason, eh? :pinkiecrazy: Glad you liked the story though.)

Hmmm it is cheesy...that must be why I had a problem with it; I'm lactose-intolerant!:rainbowlaugh: (No really I am:rainbowwild:)
No argument that she desrerves it though.

1510619 Ha, you should see the stories I post on Fanfiction, dude; they're even cheesier than that! :rainbowlaugh:
But cheese can be appreciated :raritywink: Sometimes.
(BTW, I love your profile pic!)

If you mean story cheese, yes it can be appreciated...if you mean real cheese...

And yes I love that pic too.:pinkiehappy:

D'awww. The bit where Scoots got her cutie mark was a tad bit weak, (why did she get it for basically crashing?) but this was a nice, heartwarming story. Thumbs up, this was great.

1510729 Well, as I told Edragon...
'Well, me and my cowriter decided to give Scootaloo her cutie mark because she's waited so long for it and that she tried so hard to get it. She deserved it because, even though she cried, she accepted that she failed. (Really cheesy reason, eh? :pinkiecrazy: Glad you liked the story though.)'


D'awww. I feel warm inside.

1510789 :rainbowkiss: Don't you? Gotta love dat cheese :pinkiehappy:

This story put me in a really good mood, Scootalove is best love! :rainbowkiss::scootangel:

Me gusta. that was great:heart:

I co-wrote this one too! You should give me credit or I'll send someone to eat your face. But this is cute (even though I wrote half of it lol) :rainbowkiss: :yay:

seriously tho: Y U NO GIVE ME CREDIT FOR HELPIN JOO? :flutterrage:

1518728 Maybe you should read the whole dang summary, girl! :rainbowlaugh:

1521166 Yes, it was; you are just very lazy :derpytongue2:

Okay. I like this story. However, the way Scootaloo got her cutie mark at the end (to me) fell a little short. I could see if Scootaloo landed THEN hitting the branch to get her cutie mark.

I smell cheese.

Awwwwww. Scootaloo is best filly. :pinkiecrazy:

1637626 Cheeeeeeeeeeeese...............is..........................good.............

I love cheesey stuff.............or just the word cheese..................cheeeeeeeeeeeese,cheeeeeeeeeeeeeese, cheese cheese cheese,PICKLES!(Getting distracted)CHEEEEEEEEEEESE!

1888718 Hey I love the word pickles..........piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiickllllllllllllllllllles,piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicklllllllllllllllllllllles,pickles,pikles,pickles, DONUTS! ( bad boy no donuts) PIIIIIIIIIIIIICKLLLLLLLLLES!

1510492 you too wow what is it with My Little Dashie?

2297981... have you read that story? :applejackconfused:

2297998 yes, yes I have although I can't find it anymore I wantto put it on my "you should read list" or what ever it is called.

Awwww I love ScootaDash sistership stories! :heart:

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