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Eagle Heart


Just some guy who thinks he's cool, when clearly he's not.

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Thalosaria is a beautiful planet on the brink of destruction. Why, you may ask? War. The Shaizhar - a peaceful feline like race bent on keeping their planet from evil. The Criujrib - lupine aliens who invaded and enslaved the Shaizhar. In this time of slavery, for many years the Shaizhar knew not how they could fight against the chains of oppression, until one finally stood up and said, "No." He started an uprising, and led his people out of the Criujrib city. He led them to their new village, Hovviwo. From there, they rebuilt their race, stronger, smarter, and angrier. This started an all-out war between the races. For nearly 2,000 years, they've battled against each other. The Talatoh plains, the area in between the Necvxouhk Forest and the Xemcudt Jungle. And they who control this land, control the world. With the Criujrib's technology, the Criujib have captured these plains, and now seek to lay siege to the Xemcudt Jungle, home to the Shaizhar. Two warriors of the Shaizhar show great promise to be heroes of their race; Rhulo Jeic and Haffoh Zunrhouboh are their names. Join them on their journey to fight for their people, and return the Shaizhar to their former glory. And the High Priest of the Shaizhar foretold in their language in the beginning, "I see strange creatures, ones I have not yet seen in my life. They are not from our world, nor do they bring bad tithings. I see a bright light and a colorful land, full of strange villages and creatures of the world like no other. I do not know what this means, but I do know that it will change the entire course of this war... For better, or for worse."

Collab with me and ZachTheBrony

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That beginning paragraph pretty much sums up the whole story, now doesn't it?
Wonder how many people know what language that is. But wait! They're felines, so why...:duck:

1515859 the language is based off of the suarian alphabet but there are many language rules that are changed. Kind of like how Spanish and Italian are really similar.

:rainbowhuh:What The Fuck just happened?:derpyderp2:Why were they arrested?:derpyderp1: I'm so confused.:fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::applecry:

1552768 You'll just have to wait and find out. :trollestia:

1552772 :pinkiegasp:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

i nearly busted my gut laughing

Better add this to my "read later"
I'll probably like it, anyway. :pinkiehappy:

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