Pony Zero: Crimson Fluttershy

When Fluttershy mysteriously disappears, Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom set out to try to rescue her. However, when the three discover a strange camera, they find themselves caught in a strange, supernatural world inside a haunted mansion. Surrounded by tormented spirits, will the Cutie Mark Crusaders find Fluttershy and make it out alive?

My Fatal Frame crossover that I wrote for EQD's Nightmare Night fanfic contest. I wrote it in a big hurry because you were only given a week to write, so I'm not really proud of its quality.

Chapters (5)

Acquiring the Camera Obscura · 26th Oct 2012 · 1,787 words
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The Mansion Reappears · 26th Oct 2012 · 1,872 words
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Separated · 26th Oct 2012 · 1,328 words
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Collapse · 26th Oct 2012 · 1,641 words
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One Last Photo · 26th Oct 2012 · 528 words
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NocturneD85

NocturneD85 #1 · Oct 26th, 2012 · · · Acquiring the Camera Obscura ·

This is going to make one quite of a Halloween read

pmcollectorboy

pmcollectorboy #2 · Oct 26th, 2012 · · · One Last Photo ·

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Well it would appear I didn't make the finals, which is actually expected. I'm actually not sure how one guy managed to pare away what would make it within just 24 hours. Now it's up to the voters.
I hate writing under pressure. Honestly, I'm not happy with the quality of this one.

pmcollectorboy

pmcollectorboy #3 · Oct 26th, 2012 · · · One Last Photo ·

1507906 Thanks for the fave, though.

Red Fox14

Red Fox14 #4 · Nov 3rd, 2012 · · · One Last Photo ·

I love Fatal Frame(though I have yet to play Crimson Butterfly), so I'm gonna check this out later.

Jack Kellar

Jack Kellar #5 · May 28th, 2014 · · · Acquiring the Camera Obscura ·

Scootaloo had been at the local park, trying her best to reach twenty head bounces of a rubber ball in an attempt to become as good as Rainbow Dash, the head bouncing champion. After a missed bounced sent the ball tumbling away down a small incline, she bounded after it to give chase for the wayward toy only to become entranced by a tiny tinkling, almost like that of a sleigh bell. Looking around yielded nothing out of the ordinary. In fact, not even the other fillies and colts playing in the park had seemed to notice the tinkling. After a second round of tinkling, Scootaloo spotted a strange red butterfly, its wings glowing an alluring luminescence, almost like the glow of a flame but giving no heat. Scootaloo remembered becoming entranced by the butterfly, by its angelic glow. She had lost track of time after chasing the butterfly but remembered wandering away from the park. Her vision had become fleeting and her memory even more fractured and shifting, becoming difficult to grasp in its intangibleness like fine sand, but somehow she remembered finding herself in a dark forest, the sun nowhere to seen, nothing but shadow embracing every branch and underbrush. In front of her stood a run-down mansion, its twisted front door opened to pitch darkness like a chilling howl, cobwebs, ruin and gloom covering the front from its foundations to its eaves, and a large courtyard surrounding her on three sides, its hallways and wooden beams also falling apart and covered in dust. In between leaving the park and finding herself standing in a foreboding forest in front of a crumbling mansion was a blur to Scootaloo, but she remembered clearly seeing Fluttershy calmly walk past her from behind like she wasn't even there and enter the gaping maw of the mansion, disappearing into the darkness. Scootaloo then fainted when she heard a horrific scream and the darkness expanded out from the doorway to engulf her.

Holy walls of text, Batman!

AisheyruFox

AisheyruFox #6 · Jun 27th, 2014 · 1 · · Acquiring the Camera Obscura ·

I. freakin. LOVE FATAL FRAME!!!!! This is going to be the most epic crossover ever!!! And you had the butterflies from two!!! *Squee!*

AisheyruFox

AisheyruFox #7 · Jun 27th, 2014 · 1 · · The Mansion Reappears ·

If I could I would just keep pressing the like button. Why can I only give one like?

AisheyruFox

AisheyruFox #8 · Jun 27th, 2014 · 2 · · One Last Photo ·

Very nice!!!! Maybe you could do a sequel or something? :D Have a lot more chapters and details and stuff. ^^ All in all a wonderful crossover.

pmcollectorboy

pmcollectorboy #9 · Jun 29th, 2014 · 1 · · One Last Photo ·

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Hey thanks for the positive words! ^_^
I honestly wasn't looking for any recognition with this story. I just wanted to throw together something for one of the Nightmare Nights contest EQD ran a couple years back. I didn't even do last year's because I swore I would never rush a story again, but I'm glad there was something in this one that people enjoyed. I probably won't do a sequel, but I do have another horror story idea. I might cook it up for this year's.

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