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The Seneschal


I am the Seneschal, the ruler of the eternal circle, and I have come for ponies.

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Fuzzy Mcfluffenstein, the mouse-killing cat, by a creation of the rats, ends up in equestria, more specifically, with fluttershy (maybe in the town, idk). How will Fuzzy cope in the new environment? Will Fuzzy even care? And how is the animal god, Fluttershy, going to deal with the brutal and gory murderer that is... Fuzzy Mcfluffenstein!?

(First Fic, had idea while in school, rate and comment as you please)

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Hehehe, a little errors there and over there. Otherwise, this's pretty good!

HOLY SHITBALLS I REMEMBER THAT GAME
OOHH FUCK

FUCKIN' CRAP HOLY FUCK
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Will read later, when it's not 3am

1501334
Thank you!:twilightsmile:
I feel like win now! :pinkiehappy:

Hmm at a quick glance it seems sound. After I finish updating my stories, I shall read like no one has read before. I mean I have like 10+ books to read.
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>1501324
Not sure if donwvote...
or upvote... :rainbowhuh:

>1501350
Well, I hope you like it :twilightsmile:

1501430
YAY! THAT'D BE AWESOME!:raritystarry:

:rainbowlaugh: Excellent
May I invite you to the Cockroach Club

1501483
I'LL KILL YOU WTH FIRE!!!!:flutterrage:
And yay :yay:

I'M SO HAPPY ABOUT THESE COMMENTS, IMA POST THIS!:flutterrage:

The lizard is named William? Just...William? Also, names aren't capitalized, which looks rather sloppy. I suppose this is decently done for the source material, as I didn't really expect much from this game to begin with.

1501759
Thank you, and your constructive critiscism.:twilightsmile:
And yes, just william...

You got my attention at Fuzzy

Comment posted by The Seneschal deleted Oct 19th, 2014

1501665 *Remembers you as one of the guys who liked his fic* *Decides to give it a read*

Poor Fluttershy... and poor rats... oh well, nothing escapes cats.:pinkiecrazy:

While I feel bad about Fluttershy, I still think this was an okay concept, so I think it's good.

And you receive extra points for the Deadpool video. DEADPOOL FOR ZE WIN!:flutterrage::pinkiehappy:

1506018
YAY! and your story's awesome too, btw, still following it:pinkiehappy:

Hmmm...I think my OC character deserves a better "pest" control.

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will read later. :twilightsmile:

Well...
Eh. It could have been better. I've never actually played any of the games, but there could (and should) have been so much more to this. What if Fluffy went on a murderous rampage in Ponyville, before causing some inane parody of Godzilla or King Kong? Perhaps the wonderbolts show up? Perhaps he murders Celestia? While the "perhaps"s could go on for a while, there is potential here, and I suggest you make this longer and/or rewrite it completely.

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Hmmm, I see your point BUT if you'd have played the games, you would have seen that fluffy ONLY kills rats, but I will take your ideas into consideration, for that would make for HILARIOUS story though :rainbowwild:

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