Ponies And Creepers Don't Mix

by Luna Plays Minecraft

Problem?

"I don't just kill my enemies, I play with them. I make sure they die miserably. It is all part of this little game we play. A deadly game of cat and mouse. But who is the cat and who is the mouse? Sometimes I am the one who is doing the running, and sometimes the one who is doing the chasing. You may ask why I do what I do, being Notches brother and all. But It is because I am Notch's brother that I do it. You want to know my secret? It is Notch who killed me."

Server: Herobrine has left the game.

Comments

[TonydBrony]

...Alright, I avidely love Minecraft, and Ponies as well. But my reaction to this? What the buck? And when a story gets me to do that, I read it. And usally like it.

[ace134]

Chapters are a bit short but hey its your story after all
but for now im to tired to continue reading so ill check back tomorrow.
Less than 3 to you.

[PlaguePaladin]

oh vinyl you fucker...

[dartmaul15]

I must say that this story could become good if you put a "few" more hourse into each chapter.

You can easily expand each chapter to about 1000 words if you go a bit deeper into what she does (such as building) and describe a bit more

At its current state it qualifies for the red thumb, but i wil hold it back and see where you take this

[Luna Plays Minecraft]

Thank you for the feedback everyone. I will try to make the chapters longer and such but I don't have much free time so i'll try my best

[Luna Plays Minecraft]

Oh crap I forgot bonus chest. Guess i'll change that to off xD

[Luna Plays Minecraft]

1497672 What are you getting at?

[Princess Cadenza]

Imagine Herobrine read this... Damn you Herobrine! What'd you do to Rainbow Dash?! (I'm getting the feeling that Herobrine is actually Discord XD I will find out