• Member Since 4th Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Dec 13th, 2018

Dumakey93


I became a brony around October 2011. I want to see how well I write stories. With my average literary skills and fascination for FIM, I hope to have an interesting journey on the Brony Express!

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Some may struggle against the world, and John is no exception. His past is a blur to him, as he drowns himself in this world's temptations. Little does he know, a force beyond his imagination, has a plan for him. But, what is this force? Why must it interfere with one man's life?

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 13 )

You have managed to catch my interest, young brony :moustache: (OK, I have no clue how old you are, but saying "Age=undetermined brony" sounds weird)
You have my tracking
-Glassed

Very well, since not knowing my age is creepy (a tad bit ironic), I'll reveal it soon...very soon...:pinkiecrazy:

interesting read so far.

Just were do you plan to go with this I wonder?:trixieshiftright:

The cover pic being of a Wolf makes me be intersested now.I LIKE WOLVES.

Hello my fellow readers and bronies. :moustache:(For those of you that are wondering) I will be putting Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle in the story after a "certain" chapter. Which chapter is it? That's a secret...:twilightsmile:

what song is that? it's so sad i must listen to it

i don't get where this is going.

confusion is the only thing I got so far. nice to have build up for a change but if it goes on any more it might be too much build up.

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Unfortunately, that song won't be found on iTunes or any other audio sharing devices. Why? Because I wrote it on the fly. The thing I can tell you is that the link below inspired me:


Could've Been

Hmm, if I was to say one thing that this story needs, it would be pacing. Somehow everything happens to quickly and we never really get to know him... :applejackunsure:
-Glassed

mooooooore

what is the significance of the cover picture to the story

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