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Commissar Rarity


You call this romance, Charlotte?

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Upon the disappearance of my dear uncle, I discovered the following documents underneath a floorboard in his house. It tells a strange story indeed, and I find myself turning to you for assistance. I realise you do not know me, but rest assured I have word from Princess Celestia Herself that you are an authority on strange occurrences. I beg for your assistance in this matter.

Additional Tag: [Cosmic Horror]


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Lovecraftian style fic. I wrote it for the Nightmare Night contest but derped and discovered I was a day off and had missed the deadline, so I didn't send it in (it wouldn't have placed at all though).

I I think I did okay. I like the icky descriptions of horrific monsters because I like writing that kind of stuff.

Well. I guess you should... run?

Honestly, if you were going for lovecraftian horror, you should have drawn it out a bit more. It's all about the gradual aspect. Lovecraft never made a character go from sane to insane without an immense amount of introspection and detail on the subject. But I suppose it still has that sort of feel to it. So not bad I suppose. I'd give it a 3.5/5

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