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Advance


Hey, this is Advance, I am new to writing fanfics so please add any constructive criticism when reviewing my stories.

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Luna and Scootaloo embark on an super duper journey through the wonders of under/over age drinking! Also, Twilight and Rainbow Dash hook up, because why not?

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Comments ( 25 )

You know what?

You know what?

I'm tired of this. But have an upvote anyway.

Because I've yet to run out of fucks to give.

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haha it was so bad it was awesome, mainly due to the fact i assume it was meant to suck, but it was still funny and charming also i look forward to its continuance :moustache:

I am not sure what the fuck I just read.

inb4 fic gets featured and causes economic stability to central Europe before ruining its stardom with a horrific solo career.

Next chapter, Luna and Scootaloo should go out and look for a good breakfast restaurant...
That should result in a couple hundred chapters worth of material!

Dafuq?:rainbowhuh: This is actually pretty hilarious.:rainbowlaugh: But why is it marked incomplete? Are you going to make more? Please make more.:pinkiecrazy:

1494721 this is the best comment ever

:scootangel: :CUTIE MARK CRUSADER ALCOHOLICS!!!
:unsuresweetie: :ummm scoots that doesn't sound like a good idea....
:applecry: :Applejack would kill me!

So much Dafuq, so little time.

This was a great fic and you should feel great.

Not sure what i just read.

Eyup totally doing a dramatic reading of this O_o

SHUT UP AND TAKE MY UPVOTES!:pinkiehappy:

WHY!? I JUST LAUGHED MY ASS OFF IN A LIBRARY! :raritycry:

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And you respond with a Rainbow Dash; just take my love you silly author. Take it all.

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Not she wouldn't Apple Bloom. What ya think she does with her apple cider and apple juice? I've been to a few parties and she was VERY intoxicated.
And Sweetie Belle! It doesn't sound like a good idea, it sounds like a GREAT idea!
Last but not least is you Scoots. DO IT! DO IT NAO! DRINK AND DO NOT REGRET IT!
Twilight wants me to tell you this: :twilightsmile:
Pinkie Pie says :pinkiesmile:
Rarity says, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy say :heart: :heart: :heart:
Me, I say :heart: :eeyup: :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiesmile: :yay:

bravo bravo:moustache::trollestia: you just broke the internet how you made that so detailed and undetailed ill never know:rainbowhuh:
oh before i forget the watering hole waaay more cliche

Why did i enjoy this? Oh well. You earned a upvote and favorite from me!

I found this through FIMFiction_TXT. You lived up (or down?) to my expectations most wonderfully.
Only complaint is the self-aware narration gets a bit too thick at times.

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