5985709 Thank you for your comment. I had a problem with Bluemoon trying to decide how much D.I. I wanted to put into him. I think I choice to make him a bit of a hard teacher instead of a normal instructor. Mostly because its early in the war no pony really has a Idea on how to full train raw recruits.
Thank you for your comment. I am sorry that the story did not pull you in. Feedback even the negative once are useful if you have and direct examples you like to share to help improve my work feel free to send a message.
Well, I deffinatly have to start reading this.
FOE from the POV of the GI.
5821105 Thank you. Hopeful when the insanity of trying to find better work. I will be able to write more.
5985709 Thank you for your comment. I had a problem with Bluemoon trying to decide how much D.I. I wanted to put into him. I think I choice to make him a bit of a hard teacher instead of a normal instructor. Mostly because its early in the war no pony really has a Idea on how to full train raw recruits.
This intrigues me... Yes, shall read soon.
Soon…
~ Neon Lights
6202760 I will hope you enjoy the story =)
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Thank you for your comment. I am sorry that the story did not pull you in. Feedback even the negative once are useful if you have and direct examples you like to share to help improve my work feel free to send a message.
Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)