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jeez... that was dark, well done.
Indeed.
I think i'll go ahead and warm up the angry mob
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The ending was beautiful. Nice to see that ponies are capable of entering "Fuck Everything" mode too. Although if I were in RD's shoes...hooves...whatever, I might not have been so lenient. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
A good old fashion revenge fic, well done. I liked it!
no severing of the achilles tendon?
ah well, good enough.
Wow. Just wow. B-E-A-Utiful
Minor things that I think should be looked at:
sending her in spirals toward the equestrian earth => sending her in spirals toward the Equestrian earth
The Pegasus brought Scootaloo => The pegasus brought Scootaloo
the Pegasus walked up to the crippled being => The pegasus walked up to the crippled being
Lust to avenge the filly was felt coursing through => Lust to avenge the filly coursed through
the pegasus was in search for her target => the pegasus searched for her target.
The spectrum manned mare retorted => The spectrum maned mare retorted.
The spectrum maned Pegasus spat => The spectrum maned pegasus spat
instructed the nurses to take her in, but also made sure => instructed the nurses to take her in, but also make sure
But, anyways, I liked it!
1483853 Told him about the common "pegasus" stuff, but the capital works with him.
Jeez, Gilda. Bitch...
1483834 Thanks, I've fixed all these things except the Pegasus thing. It'd take way too long to explain why.
And here I was getting my Cupcakes Playlist ready for action, and it's a Beat-The-Living-Shit-Outta Fic.
Oh well. Still good.
Poor Scootaloo.
Is there an artist link for the image?
1484024 It's at the beginning, that's all I could find, unfortunately...
1483735 Lol.
1483736 FIRE is FUN!
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Some of the images are pretty nice, yeah. No exact link I guess to that image that I see, but... whatever...
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you're speaking to a pyro church goer yourself
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WATCH EVERYTHING BURN IN A GLORIOUS BLAZE
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It's beautiful.
Awesomness in a fic! I like it!
1484131 Thanks!
1484136 No prob. :) Um, would it be too much to ask you to read mine as well? Or if you already have, please comment on them?
1484162 Sure, I'll look into them soon!
THIS is what I look for in dark stories. It was a tad short, but it was sweet, simple, and to the point. Reading this has inspired me to do terrible things to Gilda in my own fic, thank you.
1484180 You're welcome... I think...
1484122 google 'pyro watch the world burn to ashes'
You won't be disappoint.
1484185 Terrible, terrible things. So terrible, I need to say the word twice.
1484199 Sounds terrible!
1484190 Challenge accepted!
1484168 Okie dokie lokie!
Take your time.
1484242 Thanks, I will.
1483884 Love that song!
Okay, thus far I've tried to avoid tragedy fics (I'm a bit of an emotional waif), but now you have me interested.
1484475 Please, read on!
Damn, Art that was just dark. got my blood to boil. lol good story though, I liked it.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png
1484504 Thanks!!!
1483796 Thanks!
That was......interesting................
Dark.....but interesting.....
Feel bad for Scoots, not so much for Gilda.....
What you wrote gilda doing made me
and it also made me
Interesting how you did this.....its, interesting....
1484661 Thank you, I worked hard on it!
Wish I had a friend Like the Dashie in this fic when I was a kid. This was a good one Art. I felt the anger! Though I would think Rainbow should have at least ripped Gilda's wings off....or even better...just one.
Welcome back.
1484721 Thanks.
1484721 Don't forget to rate.
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Sorry boss! rate completed, Fave added, Done and done. Now off to do my final exam for my CCNA class.
FUCKING HATE ACCESS CONTROL LISTS!!!!! 
1484891 Thank you!
1484929 Rainbow lived up to her name and Element, she was no hero....but neither was she the villian...she was in a gray area. She wanted revange in a form of rage that could only be solved by physical attack and she had gotten it.
Gilda on the other...claw, was made the same way as in the show, now I remember why she's such a bad ass villian and is one of my favorites, she's cruel, cold and sometimes emotionless but she does what she think needs to be done....you done very, very well on this and I'm very glad to see Rainbow Dash as an anti-hero....very impressive.
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Lol I can see this.
And don't take that "interesting" comment as a negative one...Don't know if you did.....don't seem like it, but I just want to clarify (Because the last story I commented on....the author got pretty mad at me for what I thought was a positive comment....I should really stop commenting at 2 in the morning, lol)
Yeah those were positive "Interesting" comments, lol.
Thumbed this story up by the way.
1485051Lol
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