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The crew of the UNSC stealth prowler "Bayou" crash land on a mysterious, planet after their ship is disabled by an unknown force. Led by their captain "Crawfish" they will either get off the planet peacefully, or go home in body bags.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 32 )

Whats with all the thumb downs?

Come on Spike, we're going to miss the meteor shower
I'm FUCKING SICK OF THAT LINE IN THE HALO CROSSOVERS!! IS THE EQUIVALENT TO AN ARROW TO THE KNEEE!!!
however, im going to give it a chance

1487856 so what do you thibk of the story

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mmm it's good actually, but i cant give u a full feed-back because it's just 1 chapter, but i like it so far :P
(P.D will you introduce Spartans ??)

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(P.D in what year is taking place this history? like 2552 or...)

1488366 maybe a week or two after thehuman covanent war ended

SLOW DOWN. MORE DETAIL. LESS CLICHE, PREDICTABLE SCENES! I feel like I JUST started reading and its over! (the first chapter anyway)

1489117 ya i do that in alot of my stories i keep trying to shake it

Seems alright, other than the overused meteor shower this seems like my type of story. Also the chapter seems a bit rushed, but it's only the first chapter.

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:rainbowlaugh: yes I did like that part very much
even for the first chapter this story is already turning out great, I'm loving it :twilightsmile:

1495070 thanks i am already planing future chapters

1: Crawfish, your an asshole :facehoof:
2: Forerunners? Sweet. :moustache:

What I was expecting warthogs to blow shit up! Oh well spartan will have to do.

1524926 well you cant fit a mongoose let alone a warthog in a stealth rowler. I was expecting soome hate for what i did to the Mane 6.

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damn. And as for the mane six..... oh well

I find myself confused when reading some sections of this story. Regardless, pretty nice story. I love how you handled the forerunner/pony lore.

i love it!!! moreee feed meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I cant wait for the next chapter, and see what happens to the forerunner:pinkiehappy:

"Let me see." Sam appears at the holo terminal next to Jessica, and takes a look at the screen. "Sir, we have ponies."

That was fucking epic

7F

Short super epic story, it shame that there no more update.

God!! I hate all these fantastic stories "ON HIATUS" for ages. I wish many of them would get off their butts and finish these great stories. I think that FIMFICTION should start a policy that ONLY completed stories be submitted !!!

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