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Absolute Nonsense


Exactly what it says on the tin.

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Twilight Sparkle wants to know everything. That is a well known fact. However, somethings just shouldn't be know by mortal ponies. So what happens when she finds the truth wrapped up in one pony? Well that hasn't stopped her before. But is it really a good idea to take the story-teller into the story?

(You've all heard it before: First fic, please give constructive criticism, yadyadya.)

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Comments ( 4 )

The pacing is going to be a problem. The introduction between Nonsense and the mane six is like a 10 second conservation.:ajbemused:
Give it detail of how they react.
Also, I approve this idea:ajsmug:

I liked this story. Fourth wall stuff sure is fun to read. Enjoy your time in Ponyville.

1479883 I agree with Grey on the meeting Applejack and Rarity part, but otherwise I think that the story it great!

a little editing needed, just simple stuff. besides that i like the idea.

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