Every story starts somewhere. To some, this is the first chapter, and to others the prequel. But sometimes, the start to a tale can be the very beginning.
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Malicious_Magician
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part was through reading i was already blown away by how descriptive it was, a very fine job indeed.
A ALICORN! What kind of crazy author has a OC alicorn!
>.>
<.<
*Adds to read later*
That was short, but very well written. Good job
1474486 o,0 you do know that's lauren faust as a pony right?
This was amazing well written, good job cant wait to see what else you write
I expect great things from this story, and so does Pinkie.
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You wouldn't want to let Pinkie down, now would you?
Just Kidding, but seriously, this was great.
You deserve a dance.
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"leather-bound book"
Holy cheese and crackers!
1) Break up your paragraphs!
2) Space out your paragraphs!
3) Watch out carefully for proper punctuation use!
{example: “I suppose, I may as well get started.” The mare spoke. ===> “I suppose, I may as well get started," the mare spoke. }
I won't downvote this, but I sure can't really... you know... treat it seriously at the moment, sorry...
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this is your Goddess.
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worship her.
This was really well written, and it served your intentions perfectly. Great job! It isn't often a story, (or a beginning of one) turns out exactly as the author has said it would, but this is it!
1483196 we are her bronies, and we shall know no fear
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No land shall be beyond her sovereignty, no creature beyond her friendship.
The hoof of the Goddess protects and guides us all..
Harmony be with us...