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This story is a sequel to The Vagabond
The past still lingers for the former Vagabond and Doctor Mend. Follow them as they uncover Doctor Mend's tragic history as well as the sinister actions of an insane rogue Unicorn. They will need friends to help them, some new and some old, before they can stop the mad Unicorn.
Come and read this exciting sequel of The Vagabond.
Beware, there will be action.
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Second story of the trilogy
For both stallions to expand their knowledge n fr Valiant to be able to bring some good after years of turmoil
Luna senses something deep within Mend that will need to be addressed at some point
Lemon Lime aka Live-Wire a make Pinkie Pie
Poor Mend to suffer as he did n it looks like history is repeating
Valiant did well but danger now like with that mad mare loose
Poor Mend Valiant's only trying to help him
Valiant was right to research what could be wrong with this unicorn and let Twilight know of the situation as well as about Mend's 'troubling' behaviour
While Valiant's 'demonstration ' was shocking sometimes ya really need to prove something
Dear Live Wire, constant chatterbox but gets a stutter n tongue tied round a lovely mare
Big Mac loyal to an end n Granny knows the Apple stubbornness is strong
No matter what is happening to him Goodie n Obsidian still care fr Mend
The rouge unicorn strikes again
Valiant letting Mend know what he's doing to himself and that he is not alone, never alone
Quite a bit on Luna's backstory n I prefer your version to what we got
Mares of Harmony n Stallions of Peace, two halves of a whole
All Luna wanted was to be recognised and given the same adoration as her sister but the ponies thought there was only one princess
Big Mac's now Canterlot and he's now met Live Wire
Big Mac knows not to be baited into a fight, AJ mightn't have reacted the same way
So Valiant got Mend to go to Sea Blue (not sure how he got such a name) n we've met his cute daughter Patch
Understandable Sea Blue takes his work seriously
Well Valiant proved his potion work (though his showing proof method was a bit over the top) n now he has a job
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I really appreciate your continued comments. You are LITERALLY the only reader who has commented on this story so far.
12222691 Ya very welcome, I do what I can ^_^
Patch's condition reminds me of 'One-Eye' Willy from the Goonies
Well as know a bit more about Live Wire n his work
Big Mac let Live Wire know that he's just one pony and he shouldn't put so much pressure on himself to help everypony and Big Mac drop a Heck of a bombshell on Lemon Like about Valiant
Mend's first session has got alot of detail for Sea Blue about what's going on in Mend's mind
Never eavesdrop Big Mac but least Celestia knows of the dire situation but she is right a ministry needs to established again since the sisters can't expected to see to situations that can be handled by other ponies themselves
(I'm sorry you haven't gotten other comments, these fics are awesome)
Getting more info on the Elements of Peace & Harmony along with their roles
The part with the trio shouting Live Wife's name together was funny
So everyone's now met Trooper and surprised how much him n Valiant look alike (if they only knew)
Now they need to deal with this mad pony but now Sea Blue n little Patch are caught in this mess
Poor Patch, scared out of her mind and trapped with a mad mare while Sea Blue is worried sick and injured
Least they found where the hiding place is but capturing her won't be easy
More info about the Elements of Peace know we need to know who may possess the power
Poor Lemon getting C.M.E.S least it's not severe like the mate's
Haysburg doesn't sound like a good place to live with such unstable weather
Oh boy Valiant mentioned himself being a former vagabond, know he'll have to tell the others
Isn't that obvious from the tags?
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How do you know this is a trilogy?
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Wow! Somebody else actually decided to comment!? What universe have we entered?
I hope you have been enjoying it.
Well Valiant is glad to hear the therapy sessions are going well and Valiant telling Mend he really needs a life outside of work
Now Mend has met Lemon Lime, Live Wire shouldn't really judge since he doesn't know what Mend went through but like Pinkie trust him to bag a secret
Of course Mend would clueless about romance the poor stallion has never had such experience because he buried himself in work but least he now giving dating a try
After so many years Mend is now reunited with his loving grandparents
Well Trooper and Sea Blue are amazed by Valiant's healing potion, now the real work begins
Sea Blue's worried out his mind for little Patch
Hope Mend will remember his medication, even with him being a doctor those who have such mental conditions will either forget to take their meds (like Mend's mother did sometimes) or think they don't need to take them anymore after a certain amount of time
Well now it's time to confront the rouge unicorn and she is physically unwell as well at mentally
Now the Elements of Peace are revealed, good choices on which stallion has which representation
Oh boy
The end of the second story now into the third
This has been one Heck of a rollercoaster
Of course Trixie was the rouge unicorn (this feels similar to the Alicorn Amulet even though this fic originally came out years before the episode)
Poor Valiant, thought he found love again but Evening Star wasn't real not to mention he feels Trixie's getting a slap on the wrist compared to what he's been through
Well now the group are heading back to Ponyville and so the adventure continues
Wow.... just wow, this part where Valiant's inner turmoil after discovering Luna’s deception felt incredibly real and raw, like watching someone’s entire worldview unravel with heartbreaking clarity.
Did you always intend for Valiant to leave at this point in the story, or was that a development that came organically as his character grew?
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It was organic. I wrote this entire story series Stream Of Consciousness style.