Scootaloo, a filly who dreams of becoming just like her idol, Rainbow Dash, is distraught after surviving another day of insults and mockery by the terrible duo of Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. Finally convinced that she'll no longer be worth anything, she almost gives up her hopes and dreams. However, one day a complete stranger drops in from nowhere, and finds in her a spirit akin to his own. Can this newcomer do away with the filly's sadness and help her accomplish her goals? Well, he certainly isn't going to give up without a try!
For those of you who don't know who the guy on the left is: http://snk.wikia.com/wiki/Shingo_Yabuki
(Crossover of King of Fighters and MLP, neither of which I do own.)
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Thanks! Hopefully my ideas for the rest of the story will turn out as good as I envisioned them!
I have freaking no idea who Shingo is.
But who cares!?! This is freaking Scootaloo! Like, Fav, and can't wait for more!
Seriously, I love these kinds of stories. Scootaloo is one of my fav foals (on par with Featherweight), and I just love seeing he make friends with other characters like this. I have a feeling the next few chapters will be filled with a lot of 'D'awwww'.
Something I would suggest doing though is split up your paragraphs some more. Either that, or use a different font size, cause it just seems a little... off to me. The writing is fine, it's just a little difficult on the eyes to read sometimes.
Other than that, I love it. Good job!
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And yeah I understand that at times my paragraphs can be quite long, so I'll try separating them some when I can. But thank you very much for your thoughts! 
(By the Shingo = best King of Fighters character ever in my opinion. 
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Hey thanks man! I really appreciate the review!
1496465 Don't know what King of Fighters is.
Do I care? No. Caushe Shcootaloos.
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Hooray for Shcootaloos!
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