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The second short story in the long running Techorse series. In this episode, Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy have been put in charge of taking care of a greenhouse for a local gardener who has gone on vacation. However, when they get impatient to get the plants to grow, Fluttershy's recent nightmares might just come true. How will the friends get out of this one?

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Interesting. I think it happened a little too quickly but I found it entertaining all the same. One question: why does PAL call Fluttershy Misses Fluttershy? It makes no sense to call someone misses. I assume you mean missus? And if you mean missus then why would you call Fluttershy missus? Missus is usually for wives. Can missus be used to refer to non married women? Or did you mean miss? Okay, I guess that was more than one question. Still I enjoyed this, keep up the good work.:pinkiehappy: Sorry, I tend to ask annoying questions.


PAL is a servant robot, and so tends to call other characters title names, even if they make no sense whatsoever. (It's on purpose)

1470458 he dissapears in the mist he is the incarnate of madness he will kill if needed he's calm during life he's reckless during battle he was born in haysa but has a u.p.k accent (united pony kingdom) he has armor that makes equestrian armor look weak and he has the weapons to match he helps anypony in need and hes up for hire he is RED MIST and he will slaughter anything that threatens anypony

(he is my pony crossover of xionic madness he has the weapons of xero and omega from Xm1 to Xm 4 Pt 2)

A fine story. I would have expected Twilight Sparkle to burn the plant down, as Spike did. Also, Techorse is pretty reckless, firing lasers at a plant while Twilight Sparkle is trapped inside, I was relieved that she didn't get hit.
Two typos in the 3rd paragraph: "brush (t)he ground" and "and (k)new it".

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