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Women Of Canterlot


A love lost, and now found again :)

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Why isn't there a dark tag?

About the cover... I like it, a lot, it would be better if it was made by an experienced artist, but the one you designed with AI is quite good, especially the design of the characters, much more refreshing than all the other covers that are the same....

Yes, I know they are the same characters, but giving a personal touch to the designs makes them much better, in my opinion

Hmm. So far I'm only maybe a couple thousand words into the story, and so far it's interesting how the style is different from most fimfics. A somewhat higher reading level (and writing level), a slightly more formal style, a somewhat different texture, a feel of a science fiction future that might turn out to be a bit cyberpunk or just a bit run down. Characters who haven't even yet met, but who are...themselves, in their own ways. A writer who, when a character herself might know, for some reason knows what an injured intercostal muscle is. :twilightsmile:

I am already following/tracking this story, curious to see if my decision will pay off.

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I will aim to please, friend! Hope you enjoy the journey into one wild and weird adventure.
Hell, you nailed the genre on the head there. After reading William Gibson's entire library, several long-winded Niel Stephenson novels, and plenty of P. K. Dick, yeah, you called it right on the money. :rainbowlaugh:

Welcome back! It's a little quieter these days you'll find, but I hope you enjoy your stay regardless.

I really love the concept of an army vet Sunset. Suits her well. Nailed the contemporary feeling, too. Interested to see where this goes.

Loved this story! Needs ‘Alternative Universe’ tag!

I like this art tbh....VERY distinct from others on this site I have personally looked at tbh

Tenth #9 · June 3rd · · ·

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Would go really hard if someone just used the designs as reference.

Nice, keep going.:pinkiesmile:

Now this is how to start a story. I wonder how Sunset is going to react to how Twilight hit the van. And if that was just the start of something much worse happening to Twilight.

I don't need a paragraph to say, "I want more".

adult Sunset with young Twilight HA HA :heart:

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