Everyone knows Celestia. The queen of Equestria. The unconquered sun that has brought a thousand years of peace and harmony to the ponies. She is as kind as she is powerful. But the brightest lights bring forth the deepest shadows.
Twilight Sparkle, a young foal from the Alleys of Canterlot, will soon find out just how deep these shadows can be. Sometimes family life is complicated
Content Warning: The prologue is much darker than the rest of the story. Reading it is not necessary to understand the rest.
Note: Set before the events of season 1
Revised and rewritten version of: Still mortal, still alive
Chapters (2)
Cute Celestia and Twilight moments my ass! You lie author, you lie! Good chapter tho
Really excited for this one! Its a rewrite I belive? Sounds cool either way!
Is Spike going to be part of this revision/rewritten version of your story?
So Twilight takes the place of Sunset. Gotcha
Woohoo! I can't wait to read this one! Thank you for reworking it rather than abandoning it. Let's see where you take us, eh?
So… we already know how the story ends. Sorry, but I don’t think I’ll try to keep up with this one. It’s just too sad already, and heavens knows I don’t need anymore sadness in my note with the way things are going right now for me.
(Nothing like that. Just depressed a bit).
I still wish you the best of luck with rewriting the original story into this current one. Take care!
I'm glad this is back!
i can't wait to see how this rewrite will turn out
Had the other one in my read-later list for a while, never got around to reading it though. What was the hangup with the previous one?
Well this one doesn't have the romance tag, so I guess I'm wiling to read it.
Ohhh she helped Twi, or at least helped hide her. Lets see how this develops! Also at this point we are with a filly twilight trying to (illegaly?) learn magic right? Quite sad the work she has to put to get access to this stuff (thi makes sense as even in canon the magic she learns aint a everyday thing and is only as accesible bc of the School and Celestias help)
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Romance is still part of the story. I just didn't have enough tags to tag all the elements properly.
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Yes, he was part of the original and even plays a somewhat larger role here.
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You shall be proven right
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They will exist in history. Just a little later. I swear
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You recognized correctly. Although magic is not necessarily illegal... it just doesn't have access to the books