Princess Celestia transports six humans to Equestria and studies their culture and behavior. They will face many hardships in their lifetime in Equestria. Though along the way they will meet: friends, enemies, and even the occasional douche bag. Though something bigger is brewing over the horizon. This is my first story written constructive so criticism is appreciated.
-Van
1. I read My Little Dashie
2. Want to write serious fic
3. Wait for admins to approve story
4. Van pulls magic out of his ass
5. The legend lives
GL with this, i'll happily help you with anytihng you need
Hey mate im happy to be an editer
Hey mate im happy to be an editer il be an
I am fucking dieing of laughter
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Careful that means your brain cells are dying
Lauging my ass of
Wow..I cant stop lauging
OMFG i cant stop lauging i might died
Help..Cant...Stop....Lauging
Wow Really Impressed with the story so far
that was....fast
At the beginning of the story, i had the impression that Elliot was a girl.
Guess i was wrong.
Cant wait till next chapter
Bitch make more and blow up her fucking barn or some shit you Spartan 2 armor the strongest armor made in video game history can you put me in the story my name is Anthony
Please
I will be your editor! Contact me at sir0duke@gmail.com if you are interested!
Thank you all for your support and a new chapter will be up very soon be sure to follow the story and enjoy the ride.
OH GOD!!!! MY LUNGS!!!! I CANT BREATHE!!!
I fucking love you. No homo.
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Love you to no homo bro.
Again. FUCKING love you. No homo.
NLR forever.
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRR
I'M A BANANA.
*thud*
I think i'm going to steal that banana from you
A Great Read so far keep up the good work.
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Go 4 it.
Yeah slender man scares the living fuck out of me you do know I've actually seen him right I was forever scared and I think he's still looking for me
Oh. Shit. TWILIGHT IS A RAPIST!!!!!
Frying pan to the head
Frying pan to the head
Ahhhh my first double post fuuuuu
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Did you give him 20 dollars ?'
Just was telling my friends about this story while playing MW3 with them
Vespi yes I gave him twenty dollars I'm still being hunted down By that unholy bastard.
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Then your screwed
MW3...
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CHOCOLATE MUFFINZ!!!!!!!!
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You left her Playmare...Oh boy....
You beat the shit out of Blueblood. Brohoof.
BLUEBLOOD'S BLOOD HAS BEEN SHED, FOR RARITY
I love You Princess Luna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love You Princess Luna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i can't stop laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"i shoot you in the knee" You called her a troll"I shoot myself in the knee" I am the nlr So troll
i love revenge
I still prefer putting arrows in his knees : /
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I'm sure she will enjoy it!
2.9 makes me very Feel free to message me concerns about the story and I will do everything in my power to fix it. Because I love you guys.
-Van
Hehe...