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Tebteb


A new writer whos over his head.

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Nice. Looking forward to how this one plays out!

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Wow! You're here fast:twilightsheepish:

Also I'm glad you seem to be giving it a chance as well:twilightsmile:

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Yeah, today's my day off, I check out various fics from my favorite authors to see what's updated.

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Oh, wow! I feel honored that I count as one of your favorite authors.:twilightblush:

Also I hope you enjoy it.

Lets see if he remembers anything from collage about rocks except how to avoid calculus and explaining the aftereffects of parties? :trixieshiftright:

That was quick! Also YAY!

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Yeah didn't want to leave you guys waiting for too long, also glad to see you here as well giving the new story a chance.:twilightblush:

Comment posted by Salantius deleted May 21st

Is that a Last Dragon series cover? Specifically Firestar??

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I think so, though I'm not sure about which book it's from, I just used it cause I thought it looked fitting:twilightsheepish:

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It's a VERY good book series. VERY confusing but VERY good, I recommend!

This looks to be an interesting human in Equestria story.

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Good to know then, can't get it though since I don't got any money so:twilightblush:

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Thanks! I'm glad you seem to be at least interested in it.:twilightsmile:

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You're very welcome.

An interesting start, good job and thank you. :}

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Thanks for the compliment! Glad to see you here as well:twilightsmile:

Though, what are you thanking me for?:rainbowhuh:

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For the chapter silly. :)

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Oh, well I mean, it's kinda my job to provide though:twilightsheepish:

But your welcome i guess.:twilightsmile:

.... That cover art makes me think that this will be connected to a certain book series.

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Sorry to dissapoint you but I just used the thumbnail from that story because it looked fitting for this one.:twilightsheepish:

Truthfully, I know absolutely nothing about it.

Dangit, ah well. This'll still be interesting to read later.

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I'm glad you're areas interested enough to continue, sorry for the disappointment though :twilightblush:

Solid once again I'm here for it :scootangel:

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Glad you're for the ride again as well:twilightsmile:

Oh I just realized this making the most of it but everyone isn't anthro I can believe it took me so long to realize that

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Yeah, I'm going to try my hand more at not making everything anthropomorphic so we'll see how that turns out:twilightsheepish:

Though the dragons still are, since you know, that's how most of them are in the show.

Also, I'm glad to see that you seem interested in this as well:twilightsmile:

I’m glad that evil baby eater doesn’t seem to be involved.

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I'm also glad to see you still here as well.:twilightsmile:

Is this a rewrite of the previous dragon story, or just a new version?

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A rewrite, one that's going to go down a different direction

HA! I RECOGNIZE THAT IMAGE!
Heh
I see you dont know it though
But thats alright

Yes! Show us that baby life! And could you have San be placed into a diaper that would be cute.

I imagine the Mc's gonna be a bit power hungry since he died because he was powerless to do anything in his last life

There's a thing I just notice by reading this chapter, I don't know why it didn't make me react before.

Why was the mother dragon so nice in the last story? Dragons are supposed to be based around earning the respect of others, and how you should fight for it. Having a mother dragon that seem (from what I've seen so far) more cold, and less loving of her child, make more sense.

Also, to answer your question.

do you want me to continue chapters about Sams baby life, or do you want me to time skip a couple of years into the future to where he's a little bit more grown now?

I think you should, of course, do what you're the most comfortable with. But I personally think it is a better idea to see him progress naturally, so avoid making too large time skip. Basically what I'm saying is, make him stay baby for at least a little while.

To answer the question a good balance sounds nice to me not too much not too little after all that's MCchan getting used to his new world and contrasting it to his own maybe they'll even converge on the other story :raritywink: just my two cents though

'This time, I'm going to do what I want with my life, and I'll make sure, no one is going to take that from me. '

And what is it you want? Money? Simple? Adventure? All the ladies?

Memories of the Show seem inhibited. No baby eater.

Volkor has quite a blank slate ahead. I wonder what he’ll choose.

Was that a griffon?

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No baby eater:ajsmug:

And no it was not a griffon:trixieshiftleft:

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Two reasons not to be sad! :twilightsmile:

Dining on phoenixes?

"I do not care about what else there is to you nor why you seem more aware than most hatchlings are, all that matters to me is that you show me and my Mate the respect we deserve, after your molting arrives I will care less about what you get up to, do I make myself clear?" She questioned as I hesitantly nodded my head causing her to pull hers back and grin.

Like said before, interesting and make more sense to have more cold parents in this situation.
can't wait to see where this will go.

Wonder if adult dragons eat young rocs?

Given adult Rocs eat young dragons? :rainbowderp:

Loving where this is going plus, The Last Dragon cover art it best fitting!

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Thanks! I'm glad you seem to enjoy it so far.:twilightsmile:

Also I was going to use the last art again, but I felt like it would've been cheap to use the same thumbnail again.

Not bad not bad at all dude now this is a human who got reborn to be a dragon who act like :twilightsmile:

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Glad to see that you've been enjoying it:twilightsmile:

Just found this , interested me greatly. Hope you continue it !

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