Allan Birk never expected to wake up as a pony in Equestria, a world he only knew through his friends’ obsession with My Little Pony. Saved from Timberwolves by Zecora, he grapples with the trauma of his last night on Earth—a night of laughter, friendship, and an incident that ended it all. As he takes on the name Glam Shield, a joke from a convention, Allan must decide what to do in a world that feels too real to be a dream.
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Chapters (8)
I love this story so far. Keep up the good work
Loving this story so far, also I wonder, would a drunk Zecora speak normally (no rhymes) or would it somehow make it worse?
Also, just a small recommendation, when changing POV's start with a line saying something like Silver Spoon POV
12182017
Thanks for the tip.
Quite the abrupt start, but I like it.
12182017
I'd say just a line break is fine.
Glam's trial period in Equestria has ended, he's unceremoniously dropped into the story proper.
Good stuff, more please.
Where did that half year come from? If it's summer now, it should be a full two or three years until Nightmare Moon, no?
A HiE fic where the Mane 6's actions have logical consequences? You don't see many of those (outside of callout fics), real nice.
I like these new dynamics you're building, wordsmith.
TFTC
this shit is good
You accidentally doubled this paragraph.
Her what now?
He's becoming the town Casanova completely by accident.
12185495
Sorry my mistake, I will fix it more later, and thanks for showing this.
Unique concept. "Shield that sees all." He's coming into this with a cutie mark and a special talent that he already understands.
I'd recommend pacing yourself. Frequent updates are good, but not pressuring yourself is also important. My suggestion is to build a backlog, it will give you time to take a break if you need without running out of content to release.
Did I miss him telling Fluttershy he's not from Equestria? I thought only Zecora knew that.
nice
12187222
Sorry, yes the scene was not posted, I'm gonna need to fix it, it was with Nurse RedHearth and Fluttershy’s scene before the growl of her stomach, I'm gonna need to change to another option, Google Documents is giving me troubles when pasting to the site.
And thank a lot for remarking this issue.
Fluttershy starts in third person, then swaps to first person after Rarity's remark here.
Filthy Rich's wife is Spoiled Rich, though her alternate name is Spoiled Milk, which kind of matches her personality in the show. Diamond Tiara's redemption episode implies that Spoiled Rich/Milk was a major factor in influencing her negative behaviour. It seems this story may be discarding that and taking it a different direction.
Additional trivia: Mrs Cake's alternate name is Chiffon Swirl.
12192101
OK, it is good to know that, to be honest I stopped watching the show after Magical Mystery Cure.
I don't remember the name it the author's, but every week posted a review of the next chapter.
So about to be following the Canon, I'm gonna try to some extent but there is always something that would escape me, I'm gonna try to use some Wikis for that.
And thanks for the info.
New chapter
