Dreams of Lead Under a Pastel Sky

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Bandit1990

Bandit1990 #1 · May 13th · 1 · · 1 A Day Like Any Other ·

Looks interesting. I assume our merc didn't make it in that last mission.

You'd think ten years would have worn her down a little.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

hmaf43

hmaf43 #2 · May 15th · 1 · · 1 A Day Like Any Other ·

1. No way in hell a human can go though a decade of second childhood without huge personality change. anonfilly or otome villianess insertion method is more believable than regular reincarnation.

2. MC is ignorance as shit if she have a decade and didn't know she could go find less friendly places easily. From manehattan to dragonland.

temp129

temp129 #3 · May 16th · · · 2 Fuck around... ·

I like the concept of this story and I'd love to see where you plan on taking it.

The AntiSaint

The AntiSaint #4 · May 19th · · · 1 A Day Like Any Other ·

And yet, one detail kept scratching the back of my mind. In another lesson, we’d been told that back in the time of the Three Tribes, a group of unicorns already made the sun rise and set using nothing but their magic.

I'm fairly certain that the unicorns who did that lost their magic

hmaf43

hmaf43 #5 · May 21st · 2 · · 2 Fuck around... ·

Mc is more cringe than anonfilly... how?

And why Ponyville males wimpy? They're a small rural town with the majority population mainly doing trade works and farming. Even Rarity have to go mining gems herself.

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #6 · May 25th · · · 1 A Day Like Any Other ·

Around me, it was a fucking mess: rubble, smoke, and dust. A shitty, disgusting mess, but with that weird light that makes you feel like you’re in some cheesy fucking movie.
Each bite felt like some kind of reward I sure as hell didn’t deserve, but I don't care that good.
I stopped dead, losing my calm mask. “What’d you say, you piece of shit?” My gaze fixed on him, the threat clear in my voice.

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #7 · May 25th · · · 2 Fuck around... ·

I’ll speak with your mother and Miss Starlight to do what is right.(——”
Anything to avoid the glittery future I just slapped myself in like a fucking moron.
Like I decided.”

HawkerHurricane

HawkerHurricane #8 · Last Friday · · · Extra Chapter: Into the Smoke ·

Loving this so far. And the Mercenary Song reference was such a nice little gem. I'm looking forward to seeing what becomes of our protagonist.

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