Golden Dragon
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Looking good.
Great job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Great chapter as always.
you, author have my attention, I would very much like to see what happened next.
Oh shit son; I have a feeling that things are getting serious.
when will the next part come out lemme know thanks. btw good storyline
i hope ashe/snowfall leaves blossom for rainbow 
WHAT A
Anyway, a strong ending. This deserves to be viewed by more people.
So this is the end huh?
Hmm, it ended more suddenly than I expected, but at the same time this feels right. You are a good writer in my opinion, and a talent of a good writer is knowing when to end a story. Perhaps some will disagree with me here, and they are welcome to do so.
Would I like to see more of Ashe and Spring Blossom? Yes I would. Is it absolutely necessary and nagging at my mind? No it is not.
This kind of reminds me of Arddun Lleuad and its sequel Chwe Goldeau (read these if you haven't, they can be found on EqD) in that the story ends where it should, and the events afterward are left up to us.
At the very least, to quell some folk's alarm at the sudden ending, a short epilogue might be wanted, but it's not needed in my opinion.
Since this story is complete, I have stopped tracking it, and instead given it my gold star of favoritism.
I will keep my eye on you author, and I will wait to see what tales you decide to spin in the days to come.
-Azarias
Very awesome, very well written, keep it up in your future endeavors!