• Member Since 23rd Jan, 2020
  • offline last seen Last Wednesday

Igris


Just chilling, back from a long abscence to find the ruins of my own leftovers.

Comments ( 28 )

Across the corrupted plains, the parasites sang with her, a twisted, beautiful chorus. They watched as their elder brother, their beacon, their hope, vanished into the sea of stars — a red comet streaking toward a new world.

And so, it has begun.

I love this story, dearly.
I await patiently for more.

Blut sat like a puppet pretending to be a real boy.

His nose hasn't grown yet so I guess he's not a puppet

“Yeah, and if you keep it up, you’ll have friended your way into the whole Element squad. What’s next—spa day with Twilight?”

In the movies we call this foreshadowing .

“My darling little star needs to shine . The mares must notice~.”

Yep she's playing the role of a mother pretty well in my experience being a son.

Prediction: Mother sent Blut to Equestria so he'd finally get a girlfriend she can dote over.

Thank you for the chapter . =)

A chapter already ?
You work quick.
Don't burn yourself out though .

“I’ll make sure the noise doesn’t travel into Ponyville,” he said with a low, teasing voice.

This does put a smile in my face. =)

The romance tag, as far as the cosmos was concerned, had been denied.

Had to check the tag in the story again lol.

12176049
It's okay, I plan to finish the Prologue, maybe put a few bonus chapters, publish the interlude and then take a break before the first act. I'll probably review the storyline too.

Hope to read this soon.

But really hope Spike survives this and doesn't get infected.

The second blood has been spilled huh
I wonder when his human backstory will be reveled .
Keep cooking author and thank you for the chapter .
=)

the Scape and Run: Parasites Minecraft mod (specifically the Cotesia Glomerata Addon).

I know nothing about this mod, or even anything about Minecraft. Will this hurt my enjoyment of this story?

12177350
possibly, I make references to stuff from the Mod, but it probably won't hurt since it's also somewhat of a tutorial. I don't really implement mechanics of Minecraft, it's mostly from the mod, and even then I explain in some details the mechanics of what is happening specifically for those that have no knowledge of it. (I expected so considering how niche the focus of this story is after all). And most of what is happening is self-explanatory anyways (to me at least).

All in all, no I do not think so, there's no real sudden 'inside joke' so to say that are incomprehensible. It's basically a simple infection story with a new virus and mechanics.

I do hope you enjoy the story though, and I do try to provide images in author notes in case the descriptions i give in the story are too weirdly phrased to be properly imagined. Add to that that I make a lot of tweaks of the mod itself in my story to fit more in a World than in a Game.

Your enjoyment of the story will mostly be based on if I explained stuff properly, so it would be a skill issue on my part if you ever come to dislike this story.

He moved like a reaper in overdrive. Blade-tendrils curved downward, sweeping in perfect arcs, felling the overgrowth in symmetrical bands of precision. Each swing cut a swath of land clear, carving paths in the wild tangle of weeds like calligraphy etched into soil. The satisfying shhrk-shhrk-shhrk of plant matter being split echoed across the plot.

Man.. that would be a good asmr video.

“They should worship you,” she babbled, her voice unhinged, her thoughts echoing through the Hive with wet, slapping sounds. “Tell them to praise my baby boy! SHOUT IT, YOU LITTLE GUMDROP MEATBAGS—!”

...

I'm getting yandere milf vibes here.

Stand proud ,you can cook.

On a more serious note, I really appreciated how you showed the different perspectives of the main six. Each one felt so true to who they are. And their inner monologues about the MC—well, they hit the mark. Like a dart right at the center, perfect and on point.

I especially liked how you wrote Twilight’s POV. It was so thoughtful and subtle, yet it really captured the depth of her character. It felt natural .

You’ve definitely got me hooked on this story. I’m looking forward to more.

Thanks for the chapter! =)

Blut was seated on the rug beside the reading nook, brow furrowed, a comic book unfolded before him. Spike was beside him, animatedly pointing at a panel and explaining something about canon timelines, magic crystal amplifiers, and a superhero named “Marevel Storm.” Blut, to her mild shock, looked genuinely invested. He wasn’t just nodding along. He was asking questions.

I wonder if he remembered comics like these when he was a human.

Blut stared idly at the plain, polished wood of the ceiling above him, sprawled comfortably across his bed as the early morning sunlight leaked lazily through the drawn curtains. He knew he had work—mountains of work, really—but all he felt like doing was nothing .

Relatable.
My exams start the day after tomorrow and i don't feel like doing shit about it .

Me encanta la historia sigue asi :]

Comment posted by Goldenfmc deleted May 30th
Comment posted by Goldenfmc deleted May 30th
Login or register to comment