• Member Since 26th Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen May 24th, 2015

The philosopher


I saw a rainboom and smiled! And that's how Equestria was made! Maybe someday I'll tell you about my bio.

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She's loved him for some time now. His deep, gentle voice, his figure, his patience, and he was just so nice to her. Caramel has had a special place in the yellow pegasus' heart for years now...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 21 )

Continue this before I release the Slender Man.

Wow, that was really, really good. Poor Fluttershy :fluttercry:
1466317 You get Slendy, I'll go get the SAW guy.

1466317 continue with what? The story is complete!

Thanks for favoriting it though.
...
Why do I hear a drum? And whats this page doing here? Hm.... Always follows.... What does that even mean- oh crap.

1466402
You say its finished. The story says its finished.
But the deed is far from done, I assure you.
Now, make a sequel or make this incomplete and continue it.
Or else the SAW guy and the Slender Man will come for you.
And if you manage to survive them.
A beast far worse than your imagination can muster will hunt you and your family for 600 Moons.

1466436 so..... I'm screwed, aren't I?

1466400 thanks for favoriting... Even if you did get the guy from SAW to go after me.

1466512
It depends.
Shalt thou continue?

1466519 But I like this story as it is... It feels complete already.

If you want you can write a sequel.

1466546
No.
If you want to keep your soul.
Write a complete multi-chapter sequel, please.
If you don't want It to come after you and your loved ones.
I already have enough stories to worry about. Check'em out and I'll make your fate quicker...

1466557 well sorry. Not writing a sequel. And if I'm dead because of it then it's guaranteed that there won't be a sequel.

MY LOGIC IS UNDENIABLE.

I'll check out your stories though

Yerp flowsh donp leeit farnge.
:fluttercry: That was so beautiful, I can't type coernethyl anymore.
Ya got me. Ya got me right in the feels.
Have a fav.
1466400
And I'll get THIS maniac!

1472380 Thanks for favoriting this!

aaaaand now the Joker's after me I see. Come on guys, why so serious? :trixieshiftright:

1472544
The Philosopher... per chance, are you a Time Lord, such as me?
And no, No, NO!
This is Mark Fucking HAMMILL's Joker!
It's 'Makes you wanna laugh, doesn't it, {insert name here}' and 'There ARE no brakes on the Rape Train, Batsy!'

1472558 Am I a time lord? I'll never tell! :pinkiehappy:

1472584
Sly one... VERY sly one...
I'm not either. *wink*

1472544
And hey! At least I'm not sending HIM after you!

i like the way this story played out kinda sad but i liked it

My feelings! :fluttercry:

Good job on this one. I like how, in spite if it being short, you were able to explain Fluttershy's friendship with Caramel and her heartsickness. I liked the references to the seasons also.

A few little grammar things (and you might consider using another metaphor other than "cancer" to describe a smile, but that's just my personal tastes!) but otherwise... :yay:

Screw AppleMel and Fluttercord, CaraShy Is the one true ship.

Screw AppleMel and Fluttercord, CaraShy Is the one true ship.

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