After accidentally putting her neighbor, Mr.Nebbercracker, in a ambulance and thinking she killed him, Scootaloo believes his spirit has come back to haunt her. But she soon learns that a spirit isn't what she should worry about. But instead, it should be Nebbercracker's house itself! After learning it's alive, Scootaloo puts it upon herself to destroy the house. She gets help from her friends Applebloom and Sweetie Belle, along with DJ, Chowder and Jenny. But they have to be quick, otherwise, kids and other people will be eaten on Halloween night.
Warning: This story might have mature themes, such as drug and alcohol references and mild language.
We all know how the opening goes... Sheesh... Never thought I'd hear actor "Steve Buscemi" yell like a crazed man...
Even towards a little girl. 😰
Wow! Great opening. And I like that you have Lofty not trusting Liz. And that it's been established that Liz has been one of Scoot's babysitters for a while.
Maybe when Liz breaks something else to make Scootaloo obey her, again. She'll mutter that her threats dwindling since her aunts know her better than what Liz tries to frame her as and especially since Aunt Lofty is totally on to her.
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. And appreciate you liking the little choices I made.
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Dude, I already have that planned, so I'm deleting this. Please don't suggest any other ideas to me because I honestly wanna write this story without help from people.
Great chapter.
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Thanks
I saw the Tony Pajamas reference when Scootaloo flicked DJ in the head.
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Sorry to say, but that's definitely a coincidence because I don't know who or what Tony Pajamas is.
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It was a skit from the Amanda Show.
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Ooooh okay. I know about the show, just never watched it as a kid. Was more of a cartoon kid than a live action sitcom one, with only a few exceptions.
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That would be my guess
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Why would I tell what will happen in the next chapter before it's even released? It ruins the experience for readers. So I'm gonna ask you to delete that spoiler comment and refrain from commenting other potential spoilers in the future, and other stories. Cause you might not know this, but authors find that really annoying.
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Done
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Thank you. Again, please avoid from commenting potential spoilers in general. Not saying you should stop commenting on stories, just not potential spoilers, cause authors work days, weeks and even months writing their stories. And readers would look forward to see what's happening next, only to read your spoiler comments and that feeling will go away as they will think that will actually happen.
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I didn't know that, sorry.
But at least I covered it as a spoiler when I wrote it...
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Yes, but people are gonna be curious and click on it anyways, won't stop them from reading it.
Oh my.
And I love Monster House.
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You make a good point
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That's why I avoid discussing these things with readers as I want them to go through the story blind.
When will the next chapter come out?
Awesome work.
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Thanks
12223993 You're welcome.
Glad you had Bones join up with Zee.
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I think you mean Skull but yeah.